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A story about maple that i made

So this is what i done so far on this story I'm writing for a assignment. This is when the Black Mage's seal is broken. Give feedback.
Do not talk about spelling and english, I'm only in middle school, and english is my second language
MERCEDES
Mercedes was in trouble. She was separated from the rest of the crew, and her leg bas badly hurt. Waves and waves of Oblivion Monks kept coming, and she was going to fall to the endless swarm of the Black Mage's minions.
Another monk came at her. She raised her bowgun.
Crack!
The arrow hit dead on the target, and the monk collapsed. Her victory did not last long. Within seconds, another monk came at her.
"If they don't find me soon....."

ARAN
Aran was worried. It seems that everyone was separated from her. She was in no danger what so ever, but she was not so sure about the others.
"Where can they be?"
Crack
Aran looked back. A dark figure appeared. She put her other hand on the pole of her pole arm Maha. She buffed herself. If this was a general, then she could very well be in trouble.

Phantom.
Even though the fight was tiring, Phantom was having the best time of his life. He was finally going to get revenge on the two who killed his girlfriend, Aria.
"Your time is up Orca, you will pay for what you did to Aria"
"You think this is the best that I can do? Ha! "
Phantom wasn't discouraged. He just continued launching volleys of cards at her. He stopped though.
"That could feeling....."
"You gotten that correct, miss me?"
"Loutus.... I should've expected you. Well, this will make my revenge a whole lot easier."
"Ignorant and reckless, this is what caused you to be possessed before..."
"You're still a spirit, and you do not have your body close, I learned about that part. You also forgot, I'm much stronger than before"

Luminious
"I have to balance my powers if I'm going to control myself, I almost fried Evan when we entered this place."

He felt a strange dark force, and he knew that he needed to wear out his powers of darkness. He wondered on who. Luckily for him, one of the generals stepped out of the shadows.
"You shouldn't have stepped in this temple, Luminious."
"Arkarium, you know that I can defeat you easily."
"Perhaps, but over the last century, I have been getting stronger, while you were getting as weak as a mushroom."
"You know I have already gotten my powers back, plus a lot more."
"Then prove yourself"
Evan

Mir was growing restless. Ever since they were separated with everyone else, Mir got nervous at every little noise, and immediately turned towards it. So far, there wasn't much they encountered. Just some monks and a couple of corrupted people.
Evan sensed something wrong the second he heard the noise. Mir had already heard it, and was already turned to the source. A figure appeared. It was Von Leon.
"Well, well, if it isn't the dragon boy. Clearly not as good as the old kid, along with his giant dragon."
"Von Leon, the famous Lion King, I want to make sure you know this, but it was the Black Mage was the one who killed your wife."
"LIES!"
"If you insist."
With that, he charged into battle with Mir

Jett

"Burke..... this is your last warning. Hand over the core."
"You're weak without it, and I want to keep it that way"
"Did you not hear me correctly? I said, hand over the core."
"SILENCE!"
Two triangular robot parts appeared right next to him, shooting two rays upwards. The rays went down and hit Jett. Jett frowned.
"Did you think I would come here just because of you? I came here to fight. It was only a coincidence that I managed to find you. Now hand over the core!"
"I see you have some of your powers back, but do you have all of your powers back?"
Burke sent another ray. Jett just smirked.
"Ha! You think you can hurt me?"
Jett reaches into her pocket, pulled out something, and showed it to Burke.
"No..... NO! It's impossible!"
Burke backed shakily.
"The core.... but how? I have the piece right here"
"Apparently you didn't count on the fact that someone could repair it, that it was forged by my ancestors, not found. Its power was linked to the ones who first forged it. It was repaired completely soon after one of my encounters with a particular black smith."
Burke backed up. He looked shocked.
"No.... No.....No....."
Jett's gun turned into a futuristic, octopus-like machine, with eight opening to shoot out lasers, it was fused with the power of the core. The machine fired. Burke crumpled.
"Good bye Burke, you were a great friend, but you had to betray me, cause me to be framed by a crime so terrible, attacked me, then left me for dead. Good bye"
She reached into Burke's pocket, took out the original core, and walked away.
"Farewell, Burke."
Black Mage (completely thought)
The five heroes are not alone this time.... they have help. This won't be like last time. My generals will hold them off, maybe killing some, and the other monsters will stall them. Will they come one by one? Or will they charge at me all at once. The heroes are weakened, but so am I. Will they seal me off for good?

Burke
"Ugh..... wait I'm alive?"
Burke would've been quite shocked, except he pretty much destroyed him ability to be shocked when he saw the core, and he was nearly dead.
"But...... it must've been Jett. She spared me, but why? I took the core, I framed her for killing that king...."
Burke reached into his pocket. The core was gone. He wasn't surprised. He was surprised, when he felt paper. Jett put a note in the core's place.
Dear Burke,I guess you are wondering why I spared you, even though you did some unforgivable things to me. Well, I guess I can't exactly tell you exactly why. You were a good friend in the past, or well, I guess in the future, considering that we traveled back in time. You spared me once, so I guess we're even.
Jett
Burke suddenly felt very sorry for what he did. After all the terrible thing he did, nearly killing her, turning her into a wanted criminal (Rank SSS wanted) dead or alive, she took just one act he did, and forgave him for that. Jett would never trust him again, but he still could make it up to her.
"I have to do the right thing....."
He limped away. He was ready, to thank Jett for a second chance, and to help her.

Mercedes
She couldn't last much longer. She was going to black out. She was doomed. At least she thought she was.
"Mercedes?"
The elf queen turned. It was an unexpected sight. Demon Slayer.
"What are you doing here?"
"Vengeance, what else?"
"I mean..."
"Look, I was separated, I wandered along these halls, and I found you in trouble end of story."
Mercedes smiled. She was saved.