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Maple in Chaosstory i made

The story takes place when the black mage broke his seal. Give feedback plz. More will come as i write more.

For those who are talking about my grammer, I'm in middle school, and i couldn't work/grammer check this cause of Word never working.
Also, this is the second battle with the Black Mage After he broke his seal Read what i wrote first plz
Order:Mercedes
Aran
Phantom
Luminious
Evan
What ever other characters i want to add in (could range from cygnus to Jett to the generals of the Black Mage to the Black Mage)

MERCEDES
Mercedes was in trouble. She was separated from the rest of the crew, and her leg bas badly hurt. Waves and waves of Oblivian Monks kept coming, and she was going to fall to the endless swarm of the Black Mage's minions.
Another monk came at her. She raised her bowgun.
Crack!
The arrow hit dead on the target, and the monk collapsed. Her victory did not last long. Within seconds, another monk came at her.
" If they don't find me soon....."

ARAN

Aran was worried. It seem that everyone was seperated from her. She was in no danger whats so ever, but she was not so sure about the others.

"Where can they be?"

Crack

Aran looked back. A dark figure. appeared. She put her other hand on the pole of her polearm Maha. She buffed herself. If this was a general, then she could very well be in trouble.

Phantom.

Even though the fight was tiring, Phantom was having the best time of his life. He was finally going to get revenge on the two who killed his girlfirend, Aria.

"Your time is up Orca, you will pay for what you did to Aria"

"You think this is the best that I can do? Ha! "

Phantom wasn't discouraged. He just continued launching volleys of cards at her. He stopped though.

" That could feeling....."

"You gotten that correct, miss me?"

" Loutus.... I should've expected you. Well, this will make my revenge a whole lot easier."

"Arragent and reckless, this is what caused you to be posessed before.."

"You're still a spirit, and you do not have your body close, i learned about that part. You also forgot, I'm much stronger than before"

Luminious

" I have to balance my powers if I'm going to control my self, I almost fried Evan when we entered this place."

He felt a strange dark force, and he knew that he needed to wear out his powers of darkness. He wondered on who. Luckily for him, one of the generals stepped out of the shadows.

" You shouldn't have stepped in this temple, Luminious."

" Arkarium, you know that I can defeat you easily."

"Perhaps, but over the last century, I have been getting stronger, while you were getting as weak as a mushroom."

"You know i have already gotten my powers back, plus a lot more."
"Then prove yourself"