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I am working on [url=http://i944.photobucket.com/albums/ad286/Radvile_M/spider-1.png?t=1294439762]this.[/url] I've been working on it for hours and can't notice the many mistakes now.
I am almost done, I simply didn't have the time to finish shading the skin and cleaning up the outline completely as I'm going to sleep now.

What do you guys recommend I alter/fix? I dislike the eyes.. should I make them larger? Change the position? Etc..

I am planning on making a background of patterns, but if you have a better idea I'd really appreciate it if you shared it.

Just share whatever bugs you or something that can make the drawing more interesting/good-looking.

Thanks in advance!
I'll be checking back in the [my] morning.

Edit: This should probably have been in Art section... mods contacted. :[

January 7, 2011

3 Comments • Newest first

ChibiFever

[quote=Zigen]I'm pretty sure the mouth is open and there are no lips o_o

anyway, it would be nice if you could get the arm waving affect without having the three arms there. It just makes it look a little tacky and unproffesional. The hair and face looks pretty good, and the legs could use a bit more depth to look 3D but overall it's a nice drawing.[/quote]

Yeah, apparently I forgot to finish off the legs and the arms' shading don't look complete either. How d'you recommend I display the arm movement?

Reply January 8, 2011
Sjoooberg

The legs looks more 2d then "3d". I mean, they look too flat. I also think the mouth should be a [i]little[/i] bit more to the right.

Reply January 8, 2011
ChibiFever

[quote=Lloraki]eyes look fine, any bigger and they'd be awkward
The mouth could have a super-fine line between the two lips.[/quote]

What d'you mean by the super-fine line? Simply straight vertical lines?

Reply January 8, 2011 - edited