It's a bit jumbled(? can't find the right word), or the beat just doesn't come to me clearly.
Try adding in more contrast with the bass and crashy-sound majiggy. Unless you hate heavy beats. Good effort though, keep fiddling around and you might find something.[/quote]
oh Thanks. lol i'm using a demo version so I can't spend too much days on 1 beat cause I can't save em xD I did this in like a day or so. My speakers seem to make the bass more distinguishable but idk bout others.