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[quote=BlueColt]Kay so basically just make your own rap, can be as long as you want it to be...

came up with this from the top of my head, criticize it as much as you want, I don't really care. It's basically about how other countries think about America, so here goes.

From where I come, man, there ain't no water
Everyday, man, it keeps getting hotter
Curling up, we just reading Harry Potter
Eating all the bacon from pigs that we slaughter
Partying all night, just leaving our daughters

And at the club, we act like llamas
School aint important, no periods, no commas
Been to every place, even the Bahamas

When it comes to sports, man, don't get me started
Turning into people that aren't kind-hearted
And all those bandwagoners, going for the Ravens
Irritates me so much, I'll move to New Haven

If it's bad in your own opinion, just tell me, I won't care. I've seen people rap on basilmarket before and trust me, I've seen worse, so I wasn't afraid to post that. If you like it, that's great, but if you can come up with some things I can work on to improve this rap, please tell me. And post your own raps![/quote]

you say you slaughter pigs and go to the bahamas
but the only pig i know, is yo momma
cuz you know what i be, a cool MC
hop on your feet and get off of this D
call me what i am, a mother f***ing G
and when you hear my verse, pls dont report me

#yolo

Listen
I be like yo
dey be like woah
den i be like what yo

[quote=pinoymystic]you gotta get this right
'cause we in the light,
rising up a fight
it aint delight

get on with yo life
stop with the strife
put away the knife
and get yoself a wife
http://vocaroo.com/i/s1Cvmq7p7xoM

i am a horrible rapper[/quote]

you are perfect3 <3

i feel like im reading youtube comments on instrumentals

Now you're probably thinkin, i'm just another depressed kid
throwin himself a pity party, just so that society will notice me
so i can get some publicity, so i can feel right at home with today's MC
but don't worry, i won't get off on some tangent
braggin about how "i'm so real" or "i'm the man"
because the second that you claim you're real, you're [b]not[/b]
so keep your mouth shut man, look what happened to tupac

and nobody gives a cluck about street cred, now go ahead
and take a moment to wrap your head around what i just said
you live in tulsa, OK a.k.a. the unknown land
sorry man, nobody here cares about your band
and i know that it's a tough reality to accept
because trust me it's something that i've had to do
man what we've lost is a certain level of respect
now open up your eyes and look who you're talking to

and i am sick of this so called "local music scene"
nothing but hippy wannabes and little bietches that scream
and your fans are weak, standin around like sheep
there's not even enough there for me to count to go to sleep
now don't speak, trust me i think i would know
i've had to share the stage with some bands that i know
only care about the dough and man they'll only play a show
to get a chance to hook up with as many girls as possible

and i've been in the crowd, people talkin too loud
while the band is playin, man that s**t is so disrespectful
i wanted so bad to get on stage and grab the mic
look em in the face and scream CLUCK YOU, now have a good night

now imma close up this verse, before it starts to drag
or before i start to talk about how my "pants sag"
because they don't and man that s**t isn't dope
take yourself to the bathroom and wash that mouth out with soap!

@blackwest I knew it before I saw the link to the video.

you gotta get this right
'cause we in the light,
rising up a fight
it aint delight

get on with yo life
stop with the strife
put away the knife
and get yoself a wife
http://vocaroo.com/i/s1Cvmq7p7xoM

i am a horrible rapper

welcome to the wild wild east!