The grim truth.
If I would never had been born,
she would have never cried,
he would have never lied.
If I would never had been born,
I would have never died.
December 18, 2010
The grim truth.
If I would never had been born,
she would have never cried,
he would have never lied.
If I would never had been born,
I would have never died.
15 Comments • Newest first
I love it.
They should put this in the syllabus
No, really?
You've gone far, lad.. -pats-
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You guys are awesome.
Best one yet.
I knew the truth a long, long time go
[i]You've been Cheating on me with SALLY[/i]
dundundun.
[quote=ewaninja]the first had was correct, the rest should be have.
nice poem, please don't think i'm a grammar nazi... even though i am.[/quote]
Its pobably not the best idea for to pos poetry from my iPod. Usually pretty keen on getting the grammar just right.
Edit: Perfect example.
the first had was correct, the rest should be have.
nice poem, please don't think i'm a grammar nazi... even though i am.
[quote=ewaninja]amazing, but needs some grammar improvements...[/quote]
It was a toss up between had and have. I guess I chose incorrectly.
amazing, but needs some grammar improvements...
is this some religious reference because i dont get it.
yay a poem i understand
This is why I'm a "true Christian."