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School me in grammar. My girlfriend got an in class essay back and some of the grading I thought was a bit iffy so I came to see if you guys could find what exactly is wrong with a couple of sentences in the essay. 1. In this essay he introduces three types of territorial behavior that he has observed in modern society, tribal territorialism, family terrisorialism, and personal space. 2. Throughout his essay he relates the behavior of long forgotten tribesmen and midevil societies to the modern human, and gives example after example of repeated patterns and rituals that are still with humans today. This is Composition 1101, or 101.