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Spirits of the keys - to kill a king p.1
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Submitted by: JoeyBartez
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Well sorry I left you on a cliff hanger. But these chapters will have about 4-5 parts, so I decided against releasing them all at once. I will not finish the series, it has 10 chapters, but I will try for all of ch.1. If you need comic making help, ask.

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+Friend | 03/03/08
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xHAWTSECKSx
52 Bellocan Bandit
 
JoeyBartez said: "


noo... no we don't need that"


Lmfao. I say get a badass spearman (like me) in there at the last second to give HB to the rebels or somefin... I dunno. Just throwin it out there :3

+Friend | 02/26/08
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Kristpin
55 Bera I/L Wizard
 
christobhal2 said: "

You need to add a crazy axe sader beast (like me) to come in and kill everyone. :}
Influx."



noo... no we don't need that

+Friend | 02/25/08
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Lthrowfarts
61 Windia F/P Wizard
 
JoeyBartez said: "

Lol yeah!"


You need to add a crazy axe sader beast (like me) to come in and kill everyone. :}
Influx.

+Friend | 02/25/08
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Kristpin
55 Bera I/L Wizard
 
koreanidiot said: "its kinda like Legend Of Zelda...if u think bout it.."


Lol yeah!

+Friend | 02/24/08
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WowImDexless
41 Scania Bandit
 
its kinda like Legend Of Zelda...if u think bout it..

+Friend | edited: Feb 24 2008
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Kristpin
55 Bera I/L Wizard
 
penguinlvr said: "It has a good storyline, but I have just one question.

Why would the rebels be led by their second-in-command? If a small batallion is forming, shouldn't they be led by their most authoritive?

Just a question, there."


I don't know, not my story. I'm comicizing a friends story, I read through it all but not very thoroughly so i'm just teetering along, besides if its something important don't want to spoil it.

Kongeric said: "

work on your grammar and spelling, kid. "

Be specific. Try as i might, paint programs don't have spell checkers and I don't take the time to process everythign in word and look for grammar and spelling because comics don't have grammar.

MadMasher said: "

Expressions plawks!"

I'll work on it. The seriousness of this comic makes it hard for me to feel to add expressions to keep a certain air about it, but I'll add more next time.

+Friend | 02/24/08
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SuperPsycho
55 Bera Hunter
 
yangz702836 said: "It's too much of a "Kill the kind, save the princess, rule the world" kind of comic for me."


Same. But I guess the editing is decent

+Friend | 02/24/08
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HollowNaruto
44 Bera Bandit
 
Expressions plawks!

+Friend | 02/24/08
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uytuyt
72 Windia Priest
 
It's too much of a "Kill the kind, save the princess, rule the world" kind of comic for me.

+Friend | 02/24/08
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LawLLLz
51 Scania Assassin
 
...
Wow.
People were shocked instead of shoked this time.

+Friend | 02/24/08
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sasuke7540
67 Bera Cleric
 
Intresting, please continue.

+Friend | 02/24/08
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SweetNuitari
122 Windia Night Lord
 
Kaboobs said: "The king hacks.

yea.."


lmao

+Friend | 02/24/08
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Kongeric
80 Windia Hermit
 
work on your grammar and spelling, kid.

+Friend | 02/24/08
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ShlapMeh
60 Scania Assassin
 
I think the rebels will lose.
Some have lvl 15 helms and a lvl 20 or 30 wepon O.o

+Friend | 02/24/08
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the king's a fighta xDD
btw komnoki it's sir isaac :D
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