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Eh only problem witht his is plot is to fast make the second one but sllow down the plot
The plot...too quick.Yep, Gentlemen Dash will be like the new OVA 9000!
Comic sucks... That is all
Thanks for all who press "I liked it" button! I really appreciate it! This isn't an actual comic though. I just wanted to get gentlemen dash in there. Well I hope gentlemen dash will be a classic! My actual comic release date is in one week!
omg! you people who laughed at this poor child are sick! he is obviously impared in his mind! fopr thse of u who laugh at these mentally challenged people should be ashamed! and for you flamers! you should be even more ashamed! if ud just take one moment to look he makes gramical errors liek a five year odl hes obiously mentally challenged!wek.. -*laugh*- JJJJJJJKKKKKKKKKK its okay to feel special some times :3 New Pic: why do sins have claws?
DeathPsycho said: "Gentlemen Dash! How about Elegant Punch, Civilized Head Crush, Graceful Leap, and completely Homosexual Blast of Fury?" haha OMG u made my day dude ;D
Yeah, I think that if my best friend (i assume) died before me on my account, I would DEFINITELY pursue the murderer with vengeance at heart while screaming "GENTLEMEN DASH!" It only makes sense. ;) New Pic: Skills Setup
I don't get it. It really doesn't make any sense at all. You didn't link anything together. :I mean, he's running, then there's Jimmy, then Jimmy's dead. It's like... What? :|
whuk said: " GENTLEMEN DASH, not even gentleman dash, gentlemen lol" Not very gentlemenly at all is it?
Wait, when did Jimmy die?
Manga4ever said: "EDIT- "Gentlemen Dash" will remain a classic on Basil." I cant be more agree with u
lamRight said: "To give an honest feedback, I think it was pretty bad. Reasons: Fastest moving plot I have ever seen. I mean, you could have broken this down so much. For Example: after the first panel, he could of had a flashback at why he is running to some distant object. I don't even know what happened between the 2-3 panels...Lengthen it. I could keep going on but I think you get the gist. We aren't playing pokemon here. There is no reason to name their attacks. The quality of that skill is REALLY bad. My suggestion is create it in bannedstory (yes it's possible) so you can get excellent quality. No need for credits. I personally think that if someone has too much black space in a comic, it looks really bad. That is my person opinion though. Go right at it if you feel the need to. Good things I like about this comic: The plot isn't that cliche...well its going so fast I can't tell...but yea. The first step is trying, which you have done. People can flame all they want but it doesn't amount to anything if they don't have the skills and patience to produce one of their own. You put in a background. That might not seem like a big thing but look around at the shoddy, no background works. Yours is better by far just because you added a background. In conclusion: Don't give up, it seems like you are just now grasping the ropes of a new program and you have enough potential to make better stuff. Just put more effort into your work so you can be proud of what you produce." Wow, you're a nice guy. :0 Everyone else just told him to leave and stop making comics. :p At least the gentlemen rush or something gave me a little giggle :p
DeathPsycho said: "Gentlemen Dash! How about Elegant Punch, Civilized Head Crush, Graceful Leap, and completely Homosexual Blast of Fury?" OMG dam you made my day i can't stop laughing HAHAHAHA i hate you! :D |
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