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Manga4ever said: ""Gentlemen Dash" will always be a classic on Basil. <3" I don't get it O_O
EDIT- "Gentlemen Dash" will remain a classic on Basil. New Pic: Picture of me!
To give an honest feedback, I think it was pretty bad.Reasons: Fastest moving plot I have ever seen. I mean, you could have broken this down so much. For Example: after the first panel, he could of had a flashback at why he is running to some distant object. I don't even know what happened between the 2-3 panels...Lengthen it. I could keep going on but I think you get the gist. We aren't playing pokemon here. There is no reason to name their attacks. The quality of that skill is REALLY bad. My suggestion is create it in bannedstory (yes it's possible) so you can get excellent quality. No need for credits. I personally think that if someone has too much black space in a comic, it looks really bad. That is my person opinion though. Go right at it if you feel the need to. Good things I like about this comic: The plot isn't that cliche...well its going so fast I can't tell...but yea. The first step is trying, which you have done. People can flame all they want but it doesn't amount to anything if they don't have the skills and patience to produce one of their own. You put in a background. That might not seem like a big thing but look around at the shoddy, no background works. Yours is better by far just because you added a background. In conclusion: Don't give up, it seems like you are just now grasping the ropes of a new program and you have enough potential to make better stuff. Just put more effort into your work so you can be proud of what you produce.
I like to watch Bleach Episodes and then go outside pretending to be Ichigo. Gotta catch em all gotta catch em all! Hollows die!
DeathPsycho said: "Gentlemen Dash! How about Elegant Punch, Civilized Head Crush, Graceful Leap, and completely Homosexual Blast of Fury?" Cherio mate!
Masterq said: "Gentlemen Dash should be the new basil phrase. It's so rediculous but it's classic." GENTLEMEN DASH, not even gentleman dash, gentlemen lol
Gentlemen Dash should be the new basil phrase. It's so rediculous but it's classic.Picture some Englishman (No offense) dashing to the mountains singing "tra la la la la la la"
His face in what I think is the third panel is scary...
homosexual blast of fury
deathpsycho that comment is so funny jl;ksajro;isjflkjlskajf! ROFLMAO
big evil and epic fight how original -_- well w/e if you can make it good than ya but story is so known |
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