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Eternal assasin episode i
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Submitted by: kaos2784
45 people liked it
First comic so please, try not to flame.

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+Friend | 08/17/08
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Dexless Sin said: "
This is bad."


Yup I agree

+Friend | 08/17/08
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Crazehsinx
48 Windia Assassin
 
Hello Mr.Cliche Comic maker I think your comic is disgusting.

+Friend | 03/29/08
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Quit
47 Scania Cleric
 
Could you tell me how to insert a back round im good with all the rest

+Friend | 03/29/08
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CheesyPinoy
55 Windia Assassin
 
blondinchen said: "so why is he dexless? dexless sucks."


Im not dexless o.o. It's just the sauna that makes it look like I'm dexless. Look at Pilfer.

+Friend | 03/29/08
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Nltsuga
34 Bera Assassin
 
blondinchen said: "so why is he dexless? dexless sucks."


yea sure...
reg dex suck

+Friend | 03/29/08
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blondinchen said: "so why is he dexless? dexless sucks."


sigh... you guys are just angry that you trained to such a high level, and then comes a dexless that can outdamage you at a lower level.

+Friend | 03/29/08
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CookieKittie
90 Bellocan Hermit
 
so why is he dexless? dexless sucks.

+Friend | 03/29/08
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Yes indeed, this is bad.

+Friend | 03/29/08
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Hydrohelix
99 Bera Hermit
 
Wow....looks like almost EVERY other comic that gets posted on basil....except this one is put together in a lower than par manner...

+Friend | 03/29/08
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Sunkai
47 Scania Assassin
 
GG FOR FIRST COMIC <3 CANT WAIT FOR NEXT

+Friend | 03/29/08
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CheesyPinoy
55 Windia Assassin
 
OhMiOhMai said: "YEAH THATS OK. I CAN PRETTY MUCH SEE EPISODES 2 - 117 IN MY HEAD. NOT LOOKING GOOD.

=O anywho"



Actually, I have made major and slight adjustments on things. I hope there will be a better outcome.

+Friend | 03/28/08
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lsmackmoms
57 Windia I/L Wizard
 
Don't use skills and use MS speech bubbles. :D!

+Friend | 03/28/08
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imamoomoo
62 Bera Bandit
 
YEAH THATS OK. I CAN PRETTY MUCH SEE EPISODES 2 - 117 IN MY HEAD. NOT LOOKING GOOD.

=O anywho

+Friend | 03/28/08
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SilverFoxR
112 Bera Crusader
 
First of all, the following are reasons you never want to use MSPaint to make a comic:
1) You want to use backgrounds as well as skills from Bannedstory
2) You want to make a larger comic (saving it as a .jpg will cause the quality to turn to junk)
I reccomend getting something like Photoshop to do the rest of these comics.

As for other critiques:
1) Edit the mouths so that they look like they're talking and not transmitting their thoughts telepathicly.
2) Try to make actual word bubbles. To do this in MSPaint, make the text off-panel, then make a bubble around it that fits the text, move the text out of the bubble, place the bubble where you want it in the comic panel, then finally put the text in over the bubble.
3) Add a small point on the text bubbles, so you know who is talking.

+Friend | 03/28/08
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BanditKingi
50 Broa Bandit
 
lQuarantine said: "Section 9 infiltrated again. Oh damn."


LMFAO ROFL must be bad
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