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drager255 said: " Correction : Be a little more careful with the grammar and you'll be good. Don't try correcting people if you can't even spell grammar. Yes, I know I corrected your spelling not grammar, but you tried correcting his grammar when you can't even spell the word right." i thought it could be spelled grammer in certain places f3
why are there 2 dids in the second one? o.o
NinjaSen said: "Teh Archer is a HAXZOR! He's wearing a Blood Nightfox! "It's BanHAMMER time, bow nah nah naw, bow bow." I'm bored...lol. But nice so far. Be a little more careful with the grammer and you'll be good  "Correction : Be a little more careful with the grammar and you'll be good. Don't try correcting people if you can't even spell grammar. Yes, I know I corrected your spelling not grammar, but you tried correcting his grammar when you can't even spell the word right.
that main character is wearing an odd assortment of clothes o.oother than that, this comic looks awesome, so far :]
Teh Archer is a HAXZOR! He's wearing a Blood Nightfox! "It's BanHAMMER time, bow nah nah naw, bow bow."I'm bored...lol. But nice so far. Be a little more careful with the grammer and you'll be good Listing: R> Bishops For Legendaries
tigerpawner said: " he just missed a '','' ''What did you want me, Athena''" Fail. It is, "Why did you want me, Athena?" or "What is it that you want with me, Athena?" or "Why did you want to see me, Athena?" other than the not so great grammar, this could turn out to be a pretty decent comic (:
kikima said: "Quote, "C" Bad grammar, its "What did you want me FOR Athena?" Or "WHY did you want me Athena?"" he just missed a '','' ''What did you want me, Athena'' New Blog: Awww~~~!!!
Quote, "What did you want me Athena?" Bad grammar, its "What did you want me FOR Athena?" Or "WHY did you want me Athena?"
so.... who stole the rice cake...... the guy wit the bow or the mage?
Almost nobody saw the what did did you want me. It's like an optical illusion o_O
:O Looks promising, keep it up! New Pic: The Last Quest #14
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