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Submitted by: XioNeo
37 people liked it
my first comic took me for ever and my basil account got stolen O_o so i had to make a new one...
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OMG XioNeo! i have found my long lost bother, your like my twin!
This will be interesting, I am more in for the story, which i give you props for.
are the guns cash shop for msea or is it bannedstory
I spot a Typo~ Wounder~ And your master is Santa! Yay presents~
chut said: "lol true, all comics r about omg master you warned me ROFL and the assultar position is overused" yeah.. i do that everyday.. 
Lethys said: " And less triple dots. :P" they're called ellipses. they are used when you want to continue what your saying without starting a new sentence.when you want to add feeling to your writing etc...
If you further your comic, remember to capitalize your "I"s and put a space after your commas.It just looks a whole lot better.
lol true, all comics r about omg master you warned meROFL and the assultar position is overused
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you went overboard with ellipses New Pic: ohsoasian.
Jake305 said: "How original, ONLY about 60% of basils screens have dodgy storylines with the "assaulter position" in them. We need more joke comics :P Edit: 3/10"
KodiacMoment said: "Please use commas, it makes it look much more neat (I guess). Don't forget periods as well." haha periods =D ANYWAY, i agree with everyone else. overused cliche storyline about a DARK and MYSTERIOUS "assassin" or "hunter" of sorts who goes around killing/getting killed because he can and its free. the end. perhaps if he randomly turned into a chicken and crossed the road youd get more "i like"s -lumpy
ickarumba1 said: "Okay. Nice comic, but i have some advice for you: KILL THIS COMIC NOW! This is unoriginal, boring and has incorrect grammar and spelling mistakes. I agree with Jake305" QFT
Okay. Nice comic, but i have some advice for you:KILL THIS COMIC NOW! This is unoriginal, boring and has incorrect grammar and spelling mistakes. I agree with Jake305 Register / login
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