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Submitted by: XioNeo
37 people liked it
my first comic took me for ever and my basil account got stolen O_o so i had to make a new one...
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Is this the template for the comic?My name is [insert name that sounds Japanese...] [Insert sound effect] [Japanese Name]: Well, I wonder what's going on outside? Train robbing hijacker 1: Look, a cat! Wanna waste our bullets for no apparent reason? Oh, and the bullet won't go through the cat, into you, John! I promise. Train robbing hijacker 2: lole, leik okayz. [Japanese Name]: Didn't Elder say that [pick a man named Stanger, or a stranger] is coming? Meanwhile, twenty minutes ago, with nothing that shows that it did happen in the past, [Japanese Name]:Yes, Master Dumbledore? [Dumbledore]: Young Padawan, someone is coming. [cheesy line.] [Japanese Name]: [cheesy response.] So that's the online template you used?
it looks like it will be good, just learn how to type correctly.i doubt you meant to spell taught wrong -_-
Nice Comic Don't care about grammer really
I'm sorry, but I hated this comic.Try using Speach bubbles, and change from the roman times font for almost everything. And better grammar, please use better grammar. I don't really like the story. New Pic: Sketchy
OMG YOU GOT KILLED THE CAT! >=O YOU WILL PAY!...(with mess44rrzzz!)
Wait...they shot a cat?
number the panels next time. But the story is pretty good.
I hate you for doing that to the cat What did cats ever do to you >:O
The panels look weird. I don't know why! :O... And text bubbles please? :O
Its good real good I like the beginning real much. lol ionno why I just like the part where you put the sun setting
im confused
Nice start, but maybe change the way you aligned the panels. New Blog: Animated Comic, the Impossible?
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