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Submitted by: Purewizard
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First part of my new series. Give tips and comments please  (I'm kinda new to this)
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DeathPsycho said: "That was the most random, pointless death scene in the history of comics But the blood addition was good" Dude, like you should be the one to talk  New Pic: There can only be one
That was the most random, pointless death scene in the history of comicsBut the blood addition was good
lmao that whole thing just flies into his body
Salmondela said: "Did he just murder him for no reason xD? MAKE MORE DEATH DEATH DEATH ! ! ! :D" The drunk guy was gonna kill the guy who looked at him. Very nice! Keep it up! New Pic: Logo (Reflection)
Things are always easy to the people in dark, hooded clothing.
err.. so he just threw him with a zard without a specific reason?More meaningless deaths!
blappo said: "That warrior must have ALOT of dex to throw that Zard." LOL. So true. D:
Did he just murder him for no reason xD?MAKE MORE DEATH DEATH DEATH ! ! ! :D
it was honestly kind of stupid it was too much action (as in plot) for the amount of panels you gave out. try to slow down the movement of the plot to a more confortable pace. it's like if a movie began with a family reunion and then somebody's car blows up with some guy hiding behind some bushes, it's crazy and throws the audience off-track. but, if you were going for a crazy, disoriented, and vague beginning, then it your aim was perfect.
The guy in the 9th panel had an idea. -Ding- New Blog: Nice to know.
blappo said: "That warrior must have ALOT of dex to throw that Zard." LOL, GG so true.
That warrior must have ALOT of dex to throw that Zard. New Pic: My paintball gun for now
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