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Submitted by: Purewizard
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First part of my new series. Give tips and comments please  (I'm kinda new to this)
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I like the very original plot where everything seems normal until danger is present! All of a sudden, a mysterious stranger comes out to save the day. Sound familiar? It's only from EVERY comic on Basil.
sykku said: "i liked the part when the guy gets stabbed "yo yo yo -slaps-
Bob.. Kyle..Bob..kyle... bob.. kyle.. WAHH -confused-Joe? Marco? POLLO? o.o;; New Video: Lv64 Fighter- Soloed 2 Crimson Balrogs ! Listing: [Bera] Trading> Fames
I like how the little light bulb lit up. New Pic: Dexless
Things are happening at utter randomness.First, the main character meets two people wanting to talk them about something, then this drunken guy threatens him, then suddenly a mysterious guy kills the drunken guy? o_o
It was pretty good 8/10 just work on a story and main plotline a little more.
Nice background, only the story should be made more interresting in the first comic. (And show people who is the main character) New Pic: Temura MsPainted
I enjoyed it for some reason, keep on making this series. :P New Pic: I'm Such A Loser.....
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