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Submitted by: s3mp4i
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I know it's not the best of pictures. I tried, lol. Please helpful critism is welcomed.
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you look like a Showa enemy New Pic: Maple Creed
OMG BRO ITS ME (sinofapollo)
Cantrox said: "The Neck is too thick :S (excuse grammar xD)" His neck isn't too thick. You could try to make his upper body wider, like his lower neck and shoulders. Nice drawing.
peaceman said: "hmm... the neck IS too thick, you dont have to show the whole left (of the person on the picture's) ear, you can add more wrinkles to the clothing to make more realistic, you can uhh lol improve pant quality, improve your shading, lol theres a HUGE obvious white spot on the paper bhind your "DEEEJ Tanaka". Other then that, good job for first time. Overall Score: 7.5/10" Neck is too thick, eh? I wonder how many people actually have giraffe necks. This wasn't a rush, but it wasn't a full time project either. The ear could be taken away. But as for the "realistic" detail on the clothing, my style really doesn't want something to look out of Death Note. Shading would be improved if I wanted to make more time out of it, but I don't. And finally I really don't see the white spot that everyone is talking about.
JCoolMage said: "He has no PP  "No PP? Oh Dear God!
hmm... the neck IS too thick, you dont have to show the whole left (of the person on the picture's) ear, you can add more wrinkles to the clothing to make more realistic, you can uhh lol improve pant quality, improve your shading, lol theres a HUGE obvious white spot on the paper bhind your "DEEEJ Tanaka".Other then that, good job for first time. Overall Score: 7.5/10
its different than other drawings at leastgj for first time
wow i cant believe my suit style is catching on
JCoolMage said: "He has no PP "no PickPocket? he is a hermit tho
Anyone else think the blue groomsman suit makes you look like a Turk?
"You want me to do WHAT?"My only issue is that the hairline isn't receding enough. |
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