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Maple Story Screen | Drawing
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Submitted by: s3mp4i
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I know it's not the best of pictures. I tried, lol. Please helpful critism is welcomed.

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+Friend | 05/16/08
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Biueisorange
88 Bera Hermit
 
you look like a Showa enemy
New Pic: Maple Creed

+Friend | 05/15/08
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ImUnHEALthy
96 Scania Priest
 
I love the way he`s standing.

+Friend | 05/15/08
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ch0pnst1x
50 Scania Spearman
 
OMG BRO ITS ME (sinofapollo)

+Friend | 05/14/08
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Cantrox said: "The Neck is too thick :S (excuse grammar xD)"


His neck isn't too thick. You could try to make his upper body wider, like his lower neck and shoulders.

Nice drawing.

+Friend | 05/14/08
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EmptyPinata
23 Broa Rogue
 
peaceman said: "hmm... the neck IS too thick, you dont have to show the whole left (of the person on the picture's) ear, you can add more wrinkles to the clothing to make more realistic, you can uhh lol improve pant quality, improve your shading, lol theres a HUGE obvious white spot on the paper bhind your "DEEEJ Tanaka".

Other then that, good job for first time.

Overall Score: 7.5/10"


Neck is too thick, eh? I wonder how many people actually have giraffe necks. This wasn't a rush, but it wasn't a full time project either. The ear could be taken away. But as for the "realistic" detail on the clothing, my style really doesn't want something to look out of Death Note. Shading would be improved if I wanted to make more time out of it, but I don't. And finally I really don't see the white spot that everyone is talking about.

+Friend | 05/14/08
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JCoolMage said: "He has no PP "


No PP? Oh Dear God!

+Friend | 05/14/08
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AthyethTO
107 Broa I/L Mage
 
Need less hair then it's perfect

+Friend | 05/13/08
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hmm... the neck IS too thick, you dont have to show the whole left (of the person on the picture's) ear, you can add more wrinkles to the clothing to make more realistic, you can uhh lol improve pant quality, improve your shading, lol theres a HUGE obvious white spot on the paper bhind your "DEEEJ Tanaka".

Other then that, good job for first time.

Overall Score: 7.5/10

+Friend | 05/13/08
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MzBunny
140 Scania Bishop
 
He's twitching! XD

+Friend | 05/13/08
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dexl3sssinzz
52 Windia Assassin
 
its different than other drawings at least
gj for first time

+Friend | 05/13/08
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joepazor
54 Scania Cleric
 
wow i cant believe my suit style is catching on

+Friend | 05/13/08
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JCDit
70 Windia Chief Bandit
 
JCoolMage said: "He has no PP "

no PickPocket?
he is a hermit tho

+Friend | 05/13/08
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McShinobi
70 Bera Hermit
 
The Neck is too thick :S (excuse grammar xD)

+Friend | 05/13/08
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TalonEsper
70 Scania Hermit
 
Anyone else think the blue groomsman suit makes you look like a Turk?

+Friend | 05/13/08
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Dweomer
84 Broa Priest
 
"You want me to do WHAT?"

My only issue is that the hairline isn't receding enough.
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