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Submitted by: LovableAkai
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I wasn't bored, my little sister/brother didn't make this, I didn't do this is 5 minutes and I don't need your flames, please.
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uhhhh drink a pot...
Overall, I thought it was pretty goood. I'm no artist, and I don't have that eye for catching talent, but I'm pretty sure you can become like...REALLY good. The thing I have to agree with everyone else are the eyes: too realistic for the vibe given off of the drawing xDand also, the tongue. However, at first I thought it was simply the angle that you're supposed to be looking at her from. And I think on her right shoulder, the cloth could have been extended out a BIT further so that it would have given the character more of a shoulder, like the opposite side. I'd give this like an 8/10 for the attempt, the actual art, and bravery for posting, and definitely a 10/10 if you could improve it little by little.
that woundo n her arm looks deadly ._. Listing: silver deputy star crew
Bebo13 said: "I suppose Micheal Jackson is in the same room as this young lady." Michael Jackson isn't in there. You're not funny. I mean.. Thats a GIRL for christ sake! And SHES GROWN UP! What are you thinking?
Bebo13 said: "I suppose Micheal Jackson is in the same room as this young lady." dont be mean. If everyone flames, then no one will post. Lets see you try posting a picture. Ill be sure to critique it. penny said: " i like the sketch-look. and i agree about the tongue and the eyes, although i think the tears match the rest of it." yea, i know i was comparing the eyes with the tear drops. The tear drops match the picture because excluding the eyes, everything is drawn with the same style.
Bebo13 said: "I suppose Micheal Jackson is in the same room as this young lady." Ummm... not funny
omgomgomg emo! jk nice drawing ;)
I suppose Micheal Jackson is in the same room as this young lady.
peaceman said: "I promise not to flame, but give improvements and suggestions. Not everyone is good at drawing, and I can see you are on the road of getting there. I can assure you, you can draw a lot better then most people i know can. (probrally 90% of the people here). Anyways, firstoff what i did like about this picture is the sparkling eyes, pinkish blush, and proportional chibi hands (finger to hand ratio), and the cartoony injury/bruise. I can see you tried shading and folds/creases, that takes a while to get used to, keep up the good work. Okay, now to what i didnt like, that you should improve (its okay dont take it personally, im critical to everyone's art): I liked you eyes, but they are sort of too realistic compared to everything else, especially the teardrops, also, the tounge should be attached to the bottom of the mouth not the top, you should be consistent on your shading (the face), if you photoshop or use any program, you should generally erase any sketching marks and have a solid (depends) line unless you are making any facial hair. Other then that, i think that this was a good drawing. Keep drawing and posting it up, and eventually you will become an excellent artist. overall score: 6.5/10" i like the sketch-look. and i agree about the tongue and the eyes, although i think the tears match the rest of it.
I promise not to flame, but give improvements and suggestions. Not everyone is good at drawing, and I can see you are on the road of getting there. I can assure you, you can draw a lot better then most people i know can. (probrally 90% of the people here). Anyways, firstoff what i did like about this picture is the sparkling eyes, pinkish blush, and proportional chibi hands (finger to hand ratio), and the cartoony injury/bruise. I can see you tried shading and folds/creases, that takes a while to get used to, keep up the good work. Okay, now to what i didnt like, that you should improve (its okay dont take it personally, im critical to everyone's art): I liked you eyes, but they are sort of too realistic compared to everything else, especially the teardrops, also, the tounge should be attached to the bottom of the mouth not the top, you should be consistent on your shading (the face), if you photoshop or use any program, you should generally erase any sketching marks and have a solid (depends) line unless you are making any facial hair. Other then that, i think that this was a good drawing. Keep drawing and posting it up, and eventually you will become an excellent artist. overall score: 6.5/10
dra1gon7rage said: "I learned a lesson after posting one single picture of my character for 24 hours; you get flamed whether it's good or not. :/ I think it's really unique how the girl's sitting down after drinking a potion...it's something you don't see being drawn every day. Great job" I like you. :]
I learned a lesson after posting one single picture of my character for 24 hours; you get flamed whether it's good or not. :/I think it's really unique how the girl's sitting down after drinking a potion...it's something you don't see being drawn every day. Great job |
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