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Submitted by: DaGrimRapper
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Just a comic I was working on a while back and decided to finish. (For all of you super logical people, where it looks like hes floating, hes holding on to the can). So...enjoy?
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he should hav got rugualur coke
Very good job. :3I like the originality of your screen. For the most part, this is a definite "win". A suggestion would be to improve some integration of the characters and text box. For example, the first slide where the "Drinker" speaks. The 2 text boxes would be best if you removed the little tail end of the first speech bubble, and connected it to the 2nd. I was a little confused as to who was speaking for a second. You could probably move the "Drinker" a little more inwards, so it actually looks like the silver pop is being drunk. Still though, great comic! (b^-^)b Edit: Just forgot, you might want to work on your background as well. The sky simply clashes with everything else. New Blog: Recent camping trip!
"Is my tin showing again?"That, right there, is pure win. 
LOL! great comic
lol I got it!the coke light is feeling ligher lol!
my friend keeps asking when those monsters will come out in GMS...That was funny (as stated before on one of my posts somewhere under page6)
Why put a straw into a can of Coke?Yes.
lol.I wish we had those in GMS XD New Blog: Not Dead, Just Inactive...
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