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The plot comes in the next issue, but.. it's kinda lame.
er...it's good cept its missing a plot =X
ShadeDemon said: "what is with the streach speech box thingy in the 10th box? i like the last panel" LOL! I just realised that >.>
what is with the streach speech box thingy in the 10th box? i like the last panel
Yay! Hurray for nice constructive criticism  .If it sounds like sarcasm, it's not.
All i can add... The training sesions should have been a lil lengehtn before he brings out his " Potential" . Would have been better if you stopped this with "Begin your training" And done the next comic on his training, at whcih you leave the audience in suspence with the " Inner power" at the end.Yay for constructive critizim? Ooo well, Overall, I guess its Good :].
The storyline isn't so great i know.BTW the Water and Fire attack is one attack so i don't think it'll get extinguished.
Looks like he's about to cancel his attack by extinguishing the fire with water.Pro.
Woah! this is starting to turn into a banned story comic with flashy skills and almost NO plotline! |
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