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Submitted by: neokyle
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If enough people like this one , i,ll do one about the real mushmom :D
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coolronald said: " Bad spelling? It is more like a completely wrong choice of words at some parts. >.>" It was funny, it was original, and the errors did nothing to interfere with the overall comprehensibility. Don't be such an ass, and learn to respect people for their work.
lol this not so muchthe real mushmom sounds good tho
wow i hate grammar douchebags so much.who cares, its a comic, not a freaking college paper. as long as it sounds funny. 'would if i do tell' < SAY THAT OUT LOUD TELL ME IT DOESNT SOUND LIKE HOW YOU ACTUALLY SAY IT. i think the bad grammar adds a nice touch to the comic department. keep it up.
I guess they're having some hawt rog smex..
neokyle said: "Ok so ive read all your comments and now im going to address them. I,ll start with my bad spelling , that part was my fault , i rushed through and dident make sure it was spelled right... As for the quality , thats how it came out , next time i,ll fix that. As for reposting this ocmic, the first time i posted it i waited 24 hours and it never showed up so i decided to repost it just because. the 2nd one everyone says is here still doesent show for me. AND TO ALL YOU FLAMERS - who are choping away at my comic , saying i wasted 2 minutes of your life , id like you to try to make a comic. P.S. this was my first EVER comic and i will learn from my mistakes , when i make the next one im going to take in mind what everyone has said , meaning there should be no errors  Thanks to all of you who said you liked it :D ALSO , alot of people dident understand the would if i do tell part. well the togs are obviously wearing makeup and the rog says to me dont tell anyone about this , meaning dont tell anyone we wear makeup , so i said would if i do tell , and in the next scene im dead , meaning they killed me to ensure i dident give away there secret." They were commenting on the "would if I do tell" because.. Well. That isn't the proper wording for that. I believe you're looking for, "What If I do tell?"
neokyle said: "Ok so ive read all your comments and now im going to address them. I,ll start with my bad spelling , that part was my fault , i rushed through and dident make sure it was spelled right... As for the quality , thats how it came out , next time i,ll fix that. As for reposting this ocmic, the first time i posted it i waited 24 hours and it never showed up so i decided to repost it just because. the 2nd one everyone says is here still doesent show for me. AND TO ALL YOU FLAMERS - who are choping away at my comic , saying i wasted 2 minutes of your life , id like you to try to make a comic. P.S. this was my first EVER comic and i will learn from my mistakes , when i make the next one im going to take in mind what everyone has said , meaning there should be no errors Thanks to all of you who said you liked it :D ALSO , alot of people dident understand the would if i do tell part. well the togs are obviously wearing makeup and the rog says to me dont tell anyone about this , meaning dont tell anyone we wear makeup , so i said would if i do tell , and in the next scene im dead , meaning they killed me to ensure i dident give away there secret." Bad spelling? It is more like a completely wrong choice of words at some parts. >.>
AnnaDragon said: ""And would if I tell" is win." For some reason that reminds me of that "all your base are belong to us" thing...
Ok so ive read all your comments and now im going to address them.I,ll start with my bad spelling , that part was my fault , i rushed through and dident make sure it was spelled right... As for the quality , thats how it came out , next time i,ll fix that. As for reposting this ocmic, the first time i posted it i waited 24 hours and it never showed up so i decided to repost it just because. the 2nd one everyone says is here still doesent show for me. AND TO ALL YOU FLAMERS - who are choping away at my comic , saying i wasted 2 minutes of your life , id like you to try to make a comic. P.S. this was my first EVER comic and i will learn from my mistakes , when i make the next one im going to take in mind what everyone has said , meaning there should be no errors Thanks to all of you who said you liked it :D ALSO , alot of people dident understand the would if i do tell part. well the togs are obviously wearing makeup and the rog says to me dont tell anyone about this , meaning dont tell anyone we wear makeup , so i said would if i do tell , and in the next scene im dead , meaning they killed me to ensure i dident give away there secret.
boy i wish i had some firends but all i got are some friends ... 
ok he made spelling mistakes...he doesn't need a million people criticizing about it
OMGI'MMA PLAY GRAMMAR NAZI LOLOLOLOLOLOL. Seriously, what? You're making a comic, you don't have to get the screeny the first shot. Take your time while typing, maybe crack a dictionary or something...
DeadWarrior said: "I think you used the word would wrong. Would an idiot. -_-" And 'here' is actually 'hear'.
blckdragon23 said: "Just because u make us look at it a second time does not make us like it more plain and simple u suck just stop making the bannedtory comics until u can create a better plot, and not that same BS "get the crystals/orb/magical power source" BS half these Bannedstory BS comics are." Looks like someones in a bad mood. Cheer up! :] New Blog: Super Smash Bros. Brawl
i like it! it's funny =3 |
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