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Submitted by: neokyle
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If enough people like this one , i,ll do one about the real mushmom :D
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You know at the part where it said "and would if I do tell", I actually read it as "and what if I do tell". I dunno why D:
Zyrro said: "this is extremely stupid u have wasted 2 minutes of my time" 2 minutes.... it only took me 30 seconds to look through it u are a slow reader.... New Blog: I Quit
Some spelling mistakes I see .o.
I liked it  It was a good idea but....You ruined it with the word "would" though. That word is supposed to be "what". You should proofread your comics better before submission. Also you randomly have your character say something about "strange music" but never address it later. The reader is left wondering wth does the music have anything to do with the rest of the comic and what kind of music it might be. I loved the two rogs putting makeup on each other though that was a funny panel xD For your next "the real MM" comic just make sure the comic flows a little more smoothly and make sure your grammar and english are spot-on otherwise it'll sound choppy. Make sure your ideas are clear as well
"And would if I tell" is win. New Pic: Pic of me
LOL weirdgood job ;]
Wait what?
Zyrro said: "this is extremely stupid u have wasted 2 minutes of my time" You must be even more stupid to take 2 minutes reading a short comic. But without his senseless negative criticism, I do have to agree that this is a bad comic. And what does it mean at the end "and would if i do tell?"
Zyrro said: "this is extremely stupid u have wasted 2 minutes of my time" no one forced you to read it did they? so in that case you wasted your own 2 minutes for reading it.
this is not funny -_-
And would if I do tell...? New Pic: Logo (Reflection)
GettiX said: " Took you 2 whole minutes to read this comic? You, sir, fail at life." You gotta look at the pictures too :]
Zyrro said: "this is extremely stupid u have wasted 2 minutes of my time" Took you 2 whole minutes to read this comic? You, sir, fail at life.
good idea but horrible way to get it out there. Listing: MDT or DT party
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