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Submitted by: vanilla
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The third installment of some random series that I decided to be a series. I didn't really intend it to go past the first page. Then doing this was pretty cool. It takes 6+ hours to do a page. It kills a pencil, pen, and a sharpie. Still not as dramatic..
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frfrfrfrfr said: "Only thing I don't like is the "I shall kill you" part. Shall? Why is the warrior being polite as he announces that he is going to kill someone? "I will kill you." sounds a helluva lot better in my opinion. The girl's nose needs some work too. Other than that, great comic man." For dramatic irony perhaps? In English class, elements like these are commonly used, in old literature at least. Using the word "shall" makes him seem of higher status. "Shall" appears to have a more condescending tone than "will". In my opinion of course. =/ The artist/author may have just used shall to make it sound cooler, or he really did think as deep as I said earlier. Shall? Why is the warrior being polite as he announces that he is going to kill someone? "I will kill you." sounds a helluva lot better in my opinion. The girl's nose needs some work too. Other than that, great comic man. and nice "manga?" lol keep it up! and bring more pics xD NYLDPxChoco said: "Jing are you triying to call us Crusaders hackers?o.o" Notice how the other Warrior guy (who came out of nowhere, who IS he? D: ) wants to kill the hacker Warrior for being a hacker. o_o So no, he's not implying that. :x but to be honest, at the end you shouldve made a frame with just the mouth er somefin with that evil smile thing dont ask me idc if u ppl flame i just speak from exp. |