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NinjkaMag #Fun Talk

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What do you think about my writing I've recently started to write for fun and expression and was wondering what ya'll think of a short exert. - I'd wake up at about 8 A.M next to a woman I spent the night with. I could like her, I could not. It could be serious, it could be not. She's still asleep. Although the sun is up, and beckons brightly, the one room apartment we're in, her apartment, is gloomy. The curtains are drawn and the floor is a dark mosaic of hip clothes and garbage; a mosaic that contrasts nicely with the mosaics on the wall. I sit at the edge of the bed wearing nothing but underwear and socks as I put on my military patterned boots. I pause in my position and enter a slight meditative state, "Should I leave or should I

General Fun

So what exactly do you think of my writing The glimpse I caught of her reignited the ecstasy I had long ago locked up and forgotten, and instantly she reined sovereign over my emotions, which is usually not a strange way for a woman to make a man feel, but I am an actor. At this very moment I'm performing for my school's annual mid-May play, so I am not an actor, I am a depressed man attempting suicide because of the lingering melancholy of a past lover whose attitude towards me was, put in a simpler way because she was always much more simple than I am, "I don't give a darn". Imagine my anxiety when for a moment on stage the sun seemed to project its bright, luminescent, life giving shine onto my eyes which was a phenomena made a