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Your clothes are too loose. Not sure why your breasts are awkward. Left hand is uncomfortable. Neck is really thin. You're cross eyed. What the hell happened to your cheek bones? Wing joints should be broken in that position. Background makes the main form less compelling.

Fine, you did a good job.

That red eye creeps me out a bit.

Great drawing

[quote=RadecHyuga]MY DRAWING OF YOU ONLY TOOK 2 HOURS! MUAHAHAHAHAHAHA! but you did beat me on the background... O___O

and ....oh...thats what you're wearing down there...[/quote]

Lol xD

MY DRAWING OF YOU ONLY TOOK 2 HOURS! MUAHAHAHAHAHAHA! but you did beat me on the background... O___O

and ....oh...thats what you're wearing down there...

The program SAI is awesome. And nice work.

i like it all accept her fingers still, awsome +1

I think the crinkly lines and clothes are part of the style. Looks nice . I do think the lines of her body, especially her face and neck area, could be a little smoother, though.

[quote=RKyais]everything so loose.
its all gonna slip off soon.[/quote]

or she didnt iron her clothes...

Well, this is quite refreshing.

You standing in blood?

Anywho, pretty much what everyone else said, the eyes don't seem the same size, and the tie is weird.

Other than that beautiful drawing

By God...
If that red scribble's your signature, then I am completely enamored by you!
Love the color choices by the way. :I

Where's stockings?

You look sexy and young in that drawing, good job.

Love your style.

After that one picture everyone wants to slap thighs. Damn, it's a good thing my fiance and I are hanging out today. ;]

it looks good but the tie looks kinda negative.

Awesome! Finally finished it Now I need to step on mine too urhg e_e

that looks really good, i can notice a few mistakes (mainly neck, tie, eyes and wings) but overall quite nice

[quote=LadyVuitton]You finally finished ^^ looks great although I think her neck is a bit twisted?[/quote]

Yah finally huh >.>