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Well I was looking around Basil while I was procrastinating for a test, and I got inspired to draw on the back of my packet. I thought I might wanna give my 2 cents to this art section, but consider it nothing more than a cent if even... It's nothing compared to what all the other people can do with their art on this site. I should be put into the amateur section... T-T

Well tell me how you think.

July 23, 2012

15 Comments • Newest first

Rezoina

@GunzAreFunz Gaah, it's not amazing, but thanks! In the next one I'm toning down the complexities and I drew in a face, which looks mediocre, but it was the best of my ability. But stay tuned!

Reply July 25, 2012
Rezoina

@Fiercerain: Yepp, oh and look at your mail, I need you to critique me before I send the next one up. No one here knows much about anime in my social circle, which was the reason why I went on that hiatus in the first place...

Reply July 25, 2012
Fiercerain

Yay you posted it Rez!

Reply July 25, 2012
Rezoina

@fun2killu: Hahaa, I got what you mean. I had thrown a lot of my H and B pencils after Art 3 because I thought I wasn't gonna draw anymore, hahaa. This was very sketchy and it was unorganized because I lost the balance of shading to define lines and graphic lining, and in anime, it's ratios are way different than hallways hahahaaa.

But I got you covered in the next drawing, I'll clean up my drawing and make sure I try to get my balance right back, just wait a couple of more days!

Reply July 25, 2012
Thorontur

I kinda like the eyes.

The scars kinda make me not like it

Reply July 24, 2012
fun2killu

@Rezoina: The way you drew the face is what confused me. I understood the glasses and the scroll, but I did not get what was under the glasses.

By defining, I mean use thicker/darker lines to make it stand out more. All of your lines of the same color so everything just blends into each other. Try experimenting with different thicknesses, different pencils, patterns, ect ect.

Reply July 24, 2012
breezyyungin

reminds me of "piratejin" i think that's what his name was

Reply July 24, 2012
PhanniLynn

It's really good but there's so much detail in it, it hurts my eyes just looking at it

Reply July 24, 2012
Rezoina

@fun2killu: Thanks for the critique! I've always strove for these comments when I was in Art 3, and I always took them to heart to take time to improve upon them!

Though I don't get what you mean by defined though. His face has a spec/burned or fragmented mask on, so with defining facial features it's all kind of hidden. (yes I did that on purpose because I forgot how to stylize faces in the anime sense) And the waist was more inspired off of the Assassins Creed belt, but yeah I will admit that looks kind of crappy, hahahaa. And I see what you mean by the hands. I think I drew hallways for too long in Art 3...

@LightingFrag: Hahaa, will do. I haven't drawn for leisure (especially in the anime sense, for well over a half a year) in awhile, so this was just a test run back into what used to be my forte.

@everyone else: Thanks!

Reply July 24, 2012 - edited
DasSana

I likes it

Reply July 24, 2012 - edited
iVege

spikes

Reply July 24, 2012 - edited
epikdeath

armor and stuff really reminded me of a character from naruto .... which I don't remember the name of

Reply July 24, 2012 - edited
fun2killu

The face and hips are not very well defined.

Also, the hands need to be lower.

Reply July 24, 2012 - edited