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Poets out there i need your help

I need to make a haiku about the 5 American Ideals.
If u didnt know the ideals they are Democracy Rights Equality Liberty Opportunity
Help please
Btw it doesnt need to include those words

June 1, 2015

11 Comments • Newest first

iDrinkOJ

fat americans
bigger cheeseburger and fries
outsource labor to china

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Xreniya

Our democracy
According to George Carlin
It's an illusion

Rights are subjective
In this godless universe
There's no right or wrong

Equality? Please.
Get your head out of your ass
Take a look around

Come back when you are
Seventy, and tell me where
Your liberty was

And finally, opportunity:

Society says:
You've the opportunity
To suck on deez nuts

THERE ALL FIVE SEVEN FIVE I HOPE I HELPED

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AkGold

@Liam All Values Gone = 4 syllables. The correct syllable formation for haikus are 5, 7, then 5 again.

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Liam

Opportunity
All Values Gone
Liberty for All
It's snowing on Mt. Fuji

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AkGold

Opportunity
Helping the Minority
That excludes Asians

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sighanide

i help u.

we are 'murica
equality is the name
of our game (mostly)

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2DayiDual

[quote=xDracius]A country is made,
by the citizens who vote;
refrigerator[/quote]
Refrigerator indeed

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xDracius

A country is made,
by the citizens who vote;
refrigerator

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unfaltering

a haiku is 5-7-5
um Liberty:
Fight for Liberty
without it we would still be
chained down, you and me

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Jaredragonx9

Oppurtunity
It breeds freedom to all
I like big butts dawg

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2DayiDual

Actually a haiku for each word sorry lmao

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