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Poem, The Awakening

this is a poem for you loves, my best IMO since my critiques say so.

<3 u all

[The Awakening]

Lifeline,
Time

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Through seeds of trees and river streams,
The goddess extends her hand to me.

Left only by the courting gesture,
An overview of the flood.

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Beyond far off walls and intuitive mass,
The road sinks to turbines,
The turbines spin glass.

The glass spits to shards,
And the shards mold to swords,
And yet again,
War is born.

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I once was a sword,
Made from human and sprites,
But I have come from a totalitarian,
Heedless in spite.

Then I fell to your arms,
And from amnesia as well,
To the coldest of mines,
So dark, so alone.

And you came to rescue me,
With the slightest arm,
Rendering my focus,
As my crown fell off.