My Newest Writing Project -Fox Yep, Fox is back to Basil, but not permanently. I've decided that between college and work, I'm gonna devote most of my time to something I plan on publishing, and some of my time to smaller writing projects that will all end up being about novel-length. My publishing project is called Shades of Grey, so far it's about 10 chapters along, but that's not what I'm going to post =P I'm going to post the chapter 1 of my newest project Chasing The Moon Before you read, if you do, there's a few things you should know... 1. I've been told this qualifies as "furry" so, I guess you can call it 'furry.' It's not teh pronoz or meant to be perverted in any way. 2. It's about 2 pages long, not gonna lie. 3. Uhh, I
Shades of Grey: Chapter 1(Prologue) Hey Basil, Fox here! So I'm back with another chapter 1/prologue. This one came from a dream I had, I wrote down what happened and decided to start writing based on what I saw, weird, yes. Anyway, before Too Long: Didn't Read's, it's 1.5 pages long, and I've been told it keeps attention fairly well. Oh, 1 last thing. I'm posting here because I want comments and honest opinions from people I DON'T KNOW. I could (and have) asked my buddies, but I feel like they're going easy because they're my friends. What better place to get critiques than from people you don't know on a forum that doesn't really care? At any rate, here it is, the prologue of "Shades of Grey." ~~~~~~~~~~ Chapter 1: It was a wide
Black and White. A maple story Hey Basil, after a small bout with inspiration. I decided to write something about the people in the guild who...gave me(?) that inspiration. This is a 1-chapter story, so this is all I'll write on it. Hope you all like it =) <3 Timeless, Vanity, and Vaft, because he's Vaft. Would write more on it, but I gtg, so be back later =D ~~~~~~ Black and White I leaned back in the comfy plane seat with the abnormally large jaguar, Jaira sitting in my lap. He sounded as content as I was, purring and nuzzling my neck with his velvety nose. “Dude, come on!” I could hear Jack, the Evan of the group, pestering Pat, who tried to enjoy the ride he had won among five others for winning the guild event. “Leave him alon
Exalted, A maplestory. Chapter 9 Hey Basil, I've started working on adding details and longer chapters, so before I go and edit my other chapters I wanted to write this one and the next one (chapter 10) If you want to know how it all got to this, just ask a question below the thread, or you can read the full story starting here =) The drop down menu on the right changes chapters. Oh yeah...I need a name for the chapter too haha. Chapter 9: I slid against the stone platform in the sky against the darkness of the night lit up by a full moon. A bored Tal watched as time after time I stood up only to be knocked back down. “Is this it? You’re the person who was gifted with my power?” Eliza approached me once again. I stood up, claw marks c
Shades of GreyChapter 1 by Fox Whooo, after a long break from Basil and the quitting of Maplestory, I've found more time to write (and focus on the aspects of getting a book published...). I recently finished chapter 11 of Chasing The Moon when I decided I'm going to go back to the beginning of Shades of Grey and enhance it in every aspect as best as I can. Grammar, plot, everything, I've been going though each chapter. This is the start of Shades of Grey, chapter 1. Oh yeah, before anything else, I'd like your Basil people to help me with a few things 1.) Comments Comments Comments: A comment bumps this to the top and helps get it more views, hopefully who can help with the other X things. 2.) Opinions Opinions Opinions: Like it? Cool, why
Maplestory Story Fightscene. Heya Basil. I've been working on this for a while [Exalted] and I just finished this. I've asked my buddies what they think, for the most part they think it's good. To make sure I wanted a few more solid opinions which is why I came to Basil, of course there are/will be people who say "tldr" or will complain about how long it is, but occasionally I run into people who give good advice as well as comments on how I could improve this, so that's what I'm hoping for =) [Things to know] 1. Characters and who they are Rag is a 5th job Hero (Champion) Nitro is an Aran (4th) Fox is a Dark Knight -in the process of transforming into his "5th job" Tal is Nitro's wolf partner Lilin is Nitro's girl (yes.
Exalted Chapter 1: Exiled Hello Basil, I originally planned to keep this a secret and throw it up on Fanfiction, but thanks to Striker1333 the writers of basil have a place to put their works, so I have him to thank for that. ~~~~~~~~ Chapter 1: Exiled I took a step forward and fell to one knee; I knew the branches of the magical tree would hold me, but I didn’t care anymore…there weren’t any good reasons to live. I stood up and patted the dust off of my tattered cloak; I wanted it to stay clean, but even in my current state of mind I knew it just didn’t matter, I would be found, and eventually I would be caught. A small shadow dashed to my side and my partner Echo darted from the sky to my shoulder. “Fox, there’s one on their w