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Rate a part of my book? I've been doing some freelance writing and was wondering what I needed to work on. Thought of this out of the blue and wrote a part of it. Constructive criticism welcomed! The Summoner Mr. Bowler glanced back again for the seventh time. His rabbit foot dangling on the edge of his pocket, the garlic necklace hitting against his neck repelling everyone next to him, and his holy water vial cupped in his hand made him a very suspicious, nerve- racking and quite a hideous man. He backed slowly away from the grimy and dark alleys of London and entered into a turmoil of passing women and men on their way to church. He tilted his blood-stained fedora at a low angle, obscuring his face and making him unrecognizable. His brisk

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Should I ask her out? Me and my friend have been friends since 6th grade and I really started liking her. At first she had a boyfriend, but today, she told me she broke up with him. I said, thats great! and she said yes! but she didnt know i heard her. she's a really close friend of mine and im just afraid if i ask her out, it might get awkward between us. she told me she liked me in 6th grade but when i asked if she still liked me, she just shrugged. i was wondering if i should risk my friendship with her for a relationship?

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Dealing with Haters When you go to school you have friends. However, I always wonder, are they my friends? I have a cousin. She's popular with EVERYBODY. When I first moved to her school, I felt like a loner. No friends no nothing. But now, I'm popular! I'm so happy! However, nothing gold ever lasts. Everyone knows me as the funny, sarcastic, smart one in school. That's how I got my friends; being funny! But today I was on Facebook and me and my friend start chatting up. We talk, and then she pops up a question that kills me in the inside. Are you homosexual? Where did that pop from? I asked her. She hesitated but told me. I was going to deal with them! But as soon as read the sentence, I feel....... like a plankton again. Floating around t

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Dealing with Haters When you go to school you have friends. However, I always wonder, are they my friends? I have a cousin. She's popular with EVERYBODY. When I first moved to her school, I felt like a loner. No friends no nothing. But now, I'm popular! I'm so happy! However, nothing gold ever lasts. Everyone knows me as the funny, sarcastic, smart one in school. That's how I got my friends; being funny! But today I was on Facebook and me and my friend start chatting up. We talk, and then she pops up a question that kills me in the inside. Are you homosexual? Where did that pop from? I asked her. She hesitated but told me. I was going to deal with them! But as soon as read the sentence, I feel....... like a plankton again. Floating around t

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Tips for Creative Writing I am really into writing whether it being essays or just stories, but I have yet to develop a plot or outline for more stories. I have a pretty adequate vocabulary and my grammar is alright too, but I need tips on how to figuratively write a story that is vivid, but easy to relate and understand. I'll probably start writing off with a novella since I have no experience and I find short stories are more fast-paced and yet interesting. I hope you basilers can recommend me a topic, genre, and some tips. Have a good day.