Quick anatomy check please UPDATE: --- Anatomy's my weakest point in art, so I'd like someone more well versed in that subject to do a quick look-over. ^^; I did my best to copy the reference, but I believe it still looks a little off.
Need help making clothes less quotflatquot? also concrit please That's where I am right now. I think the sleeve and the hat's fine-- but that's because I used references. The pantaloons and the boots on the other hand? I did it myself and yeah, it looks pretty bad. Anyone have references/advice to making the pantaloons/boots less flat? Any concrit is welcome. :)
Help me make his face look less derpy Here was the sketch: And here, I colored their faces: Aria didn't look derpy, but Phantom does. I've been staring at this for a while now and I can't shake the feeling that he looks really, really weird. I really love Aria's face though, it's almost perfect in my eyes. <3 EDIT: Some plastic surgery and he still looks funny? Looks like his face collapsed on itself.
Any concrit for this? I'm actually incredibly proud of this one. Anyways, I'd like you all to tell me whether or not her... face looks weird. Not stylistic weird but her eyes aren't in the right place weird? And can anyone give me a nicer way of doing her eyebrows? It's fineish right now but it isn't as realistic as I'd like.
Concrit please, while I sleep almost complete Wip (the hat's incomplete, and final touch-ups need to be done) Specifically, the shading- does it look correct, et cetera? I almost always get the shading completely off. Here's hoping I get it right? Additionally, how does the border at the top of her dress look too plain? Should I redo it? Any other bits that would benefit from being redone? -- fun fact: I did this [url=http://dl.dropbox.com/u/8038366/dumpster/tightrope%20rose/q1print.jpg]1 year 9 months ago[/url], and I was so proud of it. But now-- just. Holy pineappling hell. That improvement.
lol Ms Paint work, critique anatomy please My hands are itching to do something. :P May someone point out what's wrong with her arms/hands? They look very thin and unnatural, but I don't know to fix that. I just know that they're wrong. :/
Jesus Christ, its been two hours already and ETA: Made him more manlier, started on the background a little, did the rose/hand/and cape. Probably going to redo that cape, though, and relearn how to draw folds while I'm at it. :/ (I like the collar though) Please critique, especially anatomy! I hate anatomy. And clothing. ------------------------- I only got this far: .___. But I love it. :D I can't believe I didn't start trying to paint earlier.
Final remarks before posting? ETA2: To do: - curtains - trinkets ------------------- Quick ETA: To do: - add details to border on windowsill - redo curtains - add trinkets? I have an idea for this - moon - moar stars - redo the arse, that looks terrible ------------------ My shoulders hurt. LOL PROPER SHADING what is that? Also, curtains or no curtains? :/ to razorslash, if he comes: I drew the back hair but it doesn't seem very visible... help? D: