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The ankle down looks kind of akward and the left leg looks weird. Other that this is a great drawing

[quote=Pedrof1990]Hey there, nice work!

Here's some feedback: When painting those far limbs to make them fade, paint them in the color of the background, instead of a lighter color. The way you did this one, those whitened out parts are getting much more attention than they should.[/quote]
He's doing it Korean concept style though...

Striker? What's that? Another class?

Love the soft tone of the colors you chose

Needs more pegleg.

i like yo style

pretty nice!

[url=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MIZbGSXeWWE]You forgot the little mole under her eye..[/url]

But in all seriousness this is really awesome!

[quote=darkspawn980]her face is almost 100% club winx[/quote]

BELIEVE IN THE POWER OF FRIENDSHIP AND MAGIIICCCCCCC WIIINNXXXXXXXX

love how you did the hair

This is great. You are great.
I love the way you drew the hair, hat, and gloves (weapon?) especially.
There are some minor mistakes as people have already pointed out, but they're not too noticeable.
Hope to see how it looks when it's fixed!

Looks buccable

Needs more booty.

her face is almost 100% club winx

hot hot hot hot hot hot hot hot <3

who liked all of the comments here lol?

anyway its REALLY GOOD dont listen to the people here about the leg stuff its your art style

yeah, the leg proportions are weird, i realize that now haha @_@ i was trying to fix it up a bit by moving and transforming to fix the length, but i totally get what you're saying. i've been told this before too, that when i don't fully understand how things work i tend to just guess and usually over-exaggerate certain things. the weird leg lengths are kind of a part of that, i wasn't sure how much of a difference there would be between the legs so i guessed D: same for the white shade on the left leg, i know a bit about atmospheric perspective but not enough to do it right so again i guessed based on what i've seen o.o art's a trial and error process so i'll be sure to keep practicing!

i'm gonna keep checking this out and seeing what i can fix about it, and especially make sure to keep it in mind for any drawings i do later! thanks for all the feedback guys!

It's not that she's skinny. It looks weird because of her left thigh. The left leg looks awkward overall because it doesn't match the proportions of the right leg (and the white shade confuses me too). Maybe it's the loose right boot that makes her leg look extremely long. Or maybe since the left leg is father from the view, it makes the left thigh look longer than the right one.

@PCMyCrapPlox:
Opaque? D:

i was trying to make it seem like a silhouette in the back (like not a total fade away, you can still see that it's there) so it's not like a ghost leg floating away, but if it's still a bit too noticeable then i can edit again c:

@stevenman76

definitely feeling you on all of that! most of it's been pointed out before so i've been seeing what i can do right now in terms of quick fixes, i'll keep those in mind for later drawings too though!

except girl preferences, i know people think of strikers as pretty shapely since they use their body a lot but i tend to prefer tall slim women usually @_@

thigh gap o.o

Not that I can make better, but here are my thoughts. Keep in mind these thoughts are just commenting on the bad side of the picture, there are plenty of good parts!:

-The hair fades a bit too quickly, and too much along with the right leg. Unless she has really long hair and a REALLY long leg, the hair and leg probably wouldnt fade away
-The left leg very awkward. I think the reason for this is that you made it too long and skinny. Also, the way that he leg is going down on a slant and then the slant changes when it goes into the boot looks like she broke her leg
-The Armpit looks very bony
-When i think of the striker I think of her/him being pretty strong considering theyre punching a lot.

Good parts:
-I really like the hat, the face and eyes, the shading that you did(except for the fade away which I discussed, and how you drew the clothing(except what I discussed with the shoe)!

Hey guys!

I don't currently have my tablet on hand but I did some quick fixes with my laptop based on what you guys told me, how's it looking now?

[url=http://i.minus.com/j9c5y5uWsJq0f.jpg]Thanks![/url]

This is really awesome! Love the hair and the face. <3 <3 The thigh gap is a bit big though- makes the legs look strange!

I think you'd need to move the boots up a bit.
I really like how you color though!

Thanks for the feedback guys!

@Pedrof1990 and @BassChan I actually had this against a white background at first, but it seemed a little too bright before. I guess I forgot to change the color of that fade afterwards! I'll keep it in mind for next time!

Also I'll work on my legs @_@

Love it! makes me proud to be a veteran TB

[quote=Pedrof1990]Hey there, nice work!

Here's some feedback: When painting those far limbs to make them fade, paint them in the color of the background, instead of a lighter color. The way you did this one, those whitened out parts are getting much more attention than they should.[/quote]

@Aerogaa, this! I was thinking the transition was weird, too, and it's because when this is usually done, it's against a white background (a la HTK).

Omg, yes! I'll be saving this picture

Nice work. I really like her face but the right leg look a little bit odd. ^^

Dem long and skinny legs are gorgeous <3

Hey there, nice work!

Here's some feedback: When painting those far limbs to make them fade, paint them in the color of the background, instead of a lighter color. The way you did this one, those whitened out parts are getting much more attention than they should.

Stilts?

Toothpick?
This is a real boxer <3 http://www.basilmarket.com/show/screen/224103

Really looks beautiful, especially the hair!

Thigh gap

this is really good, but I dont get what you did with her left boot

This is awesome. She almost looks like a League of legends champ. <3