Basil market poetry side
Ok, I've pretty much seen everything, from what class to rap battles, but never a poetry section.
I'll read a poem, you guys be clever and make your own. Ok, i'll start.
Here i come to say,
more then what the price has been set to pay,
the friends that kept me going,
more then i have ever started knowing,
when the sky is falling down,
the people start to drown,
i'll have you,
but you never knew.
And here i come to say,
i'll miss you 'till the end of today
March 2, 2012
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[quote=xFaceIess]hmm..
erm. roses are red
violets are blue
.. something something something..
and.. (enter the final line here).
.. do you like my poem?
Isn't it beautiful! so well thought out and stuff! [/quote]
'Cept that all you need to do is bleach your hair blonde!
hmm..
erm. roses are red
violets are blue
.. something something something..
and.. (enter the final line here).
.. do you like my poem?
Isn't it beautiful! so well thought out and stuff!
Roses are red
Violets are blue
WAIT WTF! violet is purple you!
WHO... THE l-lELL MADE THIS POEM!
HE WAS... I DONT EVEN...
NVM ---- THIS STUFF IM OUT!
[quote=vgirl9999]From my heart, to destiny,
It will hurt just only me,
To tell you of,
only you, my love
My soul is lost,
Please just toss,
Me away,
I just can't stay,
I know you think this isn't real,
You just have to end and go and peel,
Away at my heart,
From the start,
Evil went after me,
I began to see,
It eating me,
I wish this was enough,
My love, my dove,
As you read this note,
Board a boat,
Run and take,
Your life is at stake,
For evil is the snake,
You my love, my angel, my dove,
I fought for you, for only you,
Fly with your wings,
Escape
Wear my cape,
One last final kiss we make
To you, and only you,
It is all true,
Please just love me,
I'll let you be,
Just remember this truth,
I will only love you.
...I thought of this randomly... Was it okay?[/quote]
Nice, its pretty good.
From my heart, to destiny,
It will hurt just only me,
To tell you of,
only you, my love
My soul is lost,
Please just toss,
Me away,
I just can't stay,
I know you think this isn't real,
You just have to end and go and peel,
Away at my heart,
From the start,
Evil went after me,
I began to see,
It eating me,
I wish this was enough,
My love, my dove,
As you read this note,
Board a boat,
Run and take,
Your life is at stake,
For evil is the snake,
You my love, my angel, my dove,
I fought for you, for only you,
Fly with your wings,
Escape
Wear my cape,
One last final kiss we make
To you, and only you,
It is all true,
Please just love me,
I'll let you be,
Just remember this truth,
I will only love you.
...I thought of this randomly... Was it okay?
isn't it "than" and not "then" in both cases..
OT: I'm not great at writing poems and the only one I remember liking is one about a moon with its silver light but it's in German so I'm not gonna bother translating
What is this, how's this even a thread?
Oh, a rhetorical question! So I said!
No time for real poetry now; I'm just messin' around,
And on a side note, I'm time bound. (maybe 1st poster?) xD
Edit: Noooooooooo! I'm 2nd! First one to post a quatrain, however.