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I just want to hear others opinions.. I know my voice is high pitched but I used it to my advantage when doing the high notes on Frank Ocean's song! I don't really listen to him :$ I made this in like 5 minutes.. I couldve held the notes longer.. and I could've made my voice louder than the track but ugh it was confusing.

Feel free to leave any comment whether it's negative or positive! I just want feedback c:

https://soundcloud.com/markaguirre/ahead

January 23, 2013

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demonstrate

[quote=Gamble]Look at all these excuses: I don't really listen to Frank Ocean, I made this in 5 mins, I could have held the note longer. If you really want anything other than negative feedback, maybe you should have put more effort into it.
The falsetto seems really forced like many others have said. You need to either work on your enunciation, or make a better recording, as I had no idea what the lyrics you were singing were, while I could easily differentiate the words in Frank Ocean's song. Unless you're alone or singing somebody happy birthday, I don't recommend you sing at all, as you can't, and I'd rather not have people cringe every time you sing.[/quote]

It wasn't even falsetto.. -sigh- why do I even bother asking basil when they don't even know anything about music.. there's headvoice falsetto.. but I do agree that it sounds weak and I'm going to re-do it more loud/strength. But, you can't base my whole singing on a 30 second clip lmao. DAMN you must on American Idol knows how falsetto sounds like.

Reply January 23, 2013
foolyouswear

wrong pitch, off-tempo, bad falsetto, etc.

Reply January 23, 2013
agester95

Heres the original
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=F15IjgyHd60
Sorry br333

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br333

[quote=agester95]Reminds me of this btw its my lullaby when i go bed <3

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=i3pfsCS7fWI[/quote]

The singing reminds me of this link... awwww you took it already.... look, I even went and got it. You can tell because I was on the youtube site which made my link different looking than yours.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_embedded&v=i3pfsCS7fWI

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fun2killu

[url=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AoSoAl-zWGk]totally relevent link[/url]

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WinterWish

Not going to lie. I personally don't like it.

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agester95

Reminds me of this btw its my lullaby when i go bed <3

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=i3pfsCS7fWI

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demonstrate

MiracleGirl: its not forced more weak..its not even my falsetto! lol thats my head voice l2listen
thankyousalim: el oh el

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demonstrate

[quote=NewbZealand]I cant even hear any words o.o[/quote]

put your volume louder....

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NewbZealand

I cant even hear any words o.o

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SuberKieran

@demonstrate: Ya, it's normally even better but it was like 2am when I recorded that and I was worried I'd wake someone up.

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demonstrate

[quote=BladeSoul69]Serious question: what gender are you?[/quote]

I actually thought for once I wouldnt get that question because im singing the same note as Frank Ocean but yeah Im a guy and I do get that a LOT

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SuberKieran

I prefer the way I sound http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FKeUB1gxVrc

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teenagedream

frank ocean :o

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demonstrate

[quote=NewbZealand]Can't tell if serious or not...[/quote]

I'm dead serious.

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NewbZealand

Can't tell if serious or not...

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