It was a English assignment on a book/ play called The Crusible. I would like your feedback please. Please note this is my first video. I'll be making more. But this looks like a music video to me lol.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=__hO-WCU8Ck
December 9, 2010
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[quote=ErikaLiu]1. The play and book is called "The Crucible"
2. The play has nothing to do with love, or ever mentioned Christmas. It was a rendition of the Salem Witch Trials that occurred in the late 1600s which dealt with a dozen or so girls who managed to pull off a stint that led to the deaths of a few people. I assume that your video portrays the two coupled characters, John and Elizabeth Proctor, which in that case this video resembles even less of since John was an angry husband that refused to believe in witchcraft and was often violent towards his wife and the people around him.
3. Having a couple of still shots of mopey looking characters being intimate and adding effects like screen rippling for a 2:44 long video hardly justifies the book, but seeing how you avoided the actual plot of The Crucible alltogether, I guess that isn't a problem. Just change the title to "A love story" or something around the lines of that and it will be regarded as another teen-made MMV. No biggie.[/quote]
lol I got several things to say about this. The project was a creative project that can be set in any time period. and we pick a quote or two that we write on a seperate paper and how it relates to that quote lol and picked the one between John and Elizabeth Proctor... Ty for the nicely comment though
OMG this is great
Good work Terry
Keep it up
1. The play and book is called "The Crucible"
2. The play has nothing to do with love, or ever mentioned Christmas. It was a rendition of the Salem Witch Trials that occurred in the late 1600s which dealt with a dozen or so girls who managed to pull off a stint that led to the deaths of a few people. I assume that your video portrays the two coupled characters, John and Elizabeth Proctor, which in that case this video resembles even less of since John was an angry husband that refused to believe in witchcraft and was often violent towards his wife and the people around him.
3. Having a couple of still shots of mopey looking characters being intimate and adding effects like screen rippling for a 2:44 long video hardly justifies the book, but seeing how you avoided the actual plot of The Crucible alltogether, I guess that isn't a problem. Just change the title to "A love story" or something around the lines of that and it will be regarded as another teen-made MMV. No biggie.