I was in math class today when I came up with the idea for this. I know my artistic ability is not great, but I still wanted to make a quick sketch of it should I ever obtain the skill needed to present it better. This is a drawing of my character jumping head first into the cave at the end of the dead mine. Zakum awaits. Criticism is welcome so long as it's not malicious.
September 21, 2012
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Shouldn't have let the room look like a box, you could have scetched the box shape really lightly but then add structures to it (doesn't take all that long). Would also need more detail on the platforms, first I thought it was fog or clouds (I read the description a while after trying to figure out what it is), the person on the rope looked like a dead one with bats around it.
Adding a little shading to the flyeyes would be good and maybe shading the back of the character giving an impression of light coming from below. would add a little depth to it including some of those speed lines pointing into the center.
Just practise regularly and you'll get better ^^ and keep practising otherwise your skills stay on the same level or even determine (I used to be kind of able to draw what I want to every now and then, now I couldn't do it if my life depended on it xD)
where's the feather on your head
I do feel like the Flyeye map should be taller. Also, perspective doesn't really work out like that, I guess. It should keep going on like a never-ending point. But I think you have a really nice image in your head . I can imagine it like your Shadower running towards a tall column of lava or something, haha.
what a fall that would be if the bats knocked you down, i like this drawing cause it shows how it would look if as in 3D
only thing i didnt like was the shadower there, seems like he is floating, could have drawn him on the very first platform
and as for the notebook paper, definitely cool if you did like in class or something to do when you are bored