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I was bored so I decided to start this thread and write a random paragraph. : ( Or grab it from an old essay!
[b]Showcase your writing skills![/b]

The sirens from across the town pierced into my ears. I am suddenly grabbed, pulled from my dreams and smuggled back into reality. I grew up in a loud and busy neighborhood in downtown Los Angeles. Even though it was in California, somehow in that neighborhood, the wind would silently crawl through the cracks of my windows and purposely drop my body's temperature. My eyes desperately cried for some sleep but my mind would burst my eyes back open with each drop of sound that pounded against my ears. Because of this, I had developed insomnia at such an early age. Though this is just one of many things you should know about me....

October 17, 2011

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DarkQuill

There are several ways to accomplish this. One is by spouting a bunch of nonsense words, but there are better ways. Throwing together random sentences about anything is the best way, so long as they are coherent. Magikarp is surprisingly quick for such a weak Pokemon. Lowering the droprate of Mesos and other items is not a good way to reduce the mesos put into the economy. I'm getting Battlefield3 over ModernWarfare3 simply because I like the gameplay better.
All in all, you can trade a Stout Shako for two Refined, but be sure you're playing a Demopan for maximum effectiveness.

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Hunter103

I saw a deer one day. I shot a deer one day. I ate a deer one day. I digested a deer one day. I had a good day.

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ElPlatano

[quote=FurFarm]Cheesy.[/quote]
Yup, knew it wasn't good

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ElPlatano

I stared into him as we crossed paths. All I could pay attention was to his cold, dark, and vicious eyes. They're perfectly followed by a dark-sleek set of descending hair from his scalp. Those eyes is something I'll never forget... Those were the eyes of someone who has seen and done so much evil. To believe this man was once my lovable cousin. He has now turned into a monster. Someone who once used to be a kind-hearted and gentle man, now a cold-blooded and soulless person. We both stared at each other for quite some time. Complete silence was around the whole terrain. Then the silence was broken by a soft-gentle gust of wind. "Ray... this time I'll finally have my revenge..." "Everything you've done to me...." "You killed my family, friends, and everyone who I loved." "Today we finish this once and for all." He then proceeded to take out a small-sharp knife. He then held it up to the point were he could see his reflection on it. The brown eyes and olive skin tone were reflected on the gray knife. "Today I shall avenge all of you." He then looked at his cousin one more time. The cold eyes staring back him. He couldn't help but shed a tear. Here he was, standing in-front of someone he used to love, someone he trusted, someone he thought could never do anything bad. Memories of him started to flow into his mind. Him and his cousin at a local family party, them playing a game of tag, all of his friends playing together with him. He thought he had the perfect life. Then the scenes came back to him. Ray standing in his parent's room with a knife soaked in blood, blood covered on his face and clothes, and his parents lying dead in their room. He realized that there was no other choice. He had to kill his cousin. With rage and revenge filling his thoughts and heart he said a few last words. "Ray, tonight your blood shall be touched with this knife." He then proceeded to hold it up. "Goodbye Ray."

That's it, but it might be a little bad.

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gcube

Uhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh nah you good.

Reply October 17, 2011
shairn

Stole the first paragraph of an analysis I did not long ago for lecture class.
It's in french because I go to a french school.

Tout d'abord, cette violence est visible par l'entremise des enfants. Premièerement, on peut observer, � l'aide des textes, qu'� Homa les enfants sont victimes de violence. En effet, le locuteur décrit plusieurs scènes d'abus envers des enfents. Par exemple, � la page 36: «Les enfants courent partout. On dirait des morts-vivants, dans la fraîcheur de l'herbe[...] Ils ont oublié les violeurs, les chauffards, les seringues et les baffes, oublié les coups d'gun, les coups d'bat, oublié. Jusqu'� ce qu'ils rentrent � la maison.» Ainsi, le procédé utilisé est la comparaison. Ce procédé est utilisé afin de créer un contraste entre la représentation innocente des enfants et l'image repoussante des morts-vivants. Il compare les enfants � des morts-vivants, morts � l'intérieur, mais vivants � l'extérieur. Deuxièmement, on peut aussi lire que les enfants sont violents entre eux-mêmes. En fait, corrompus par la violence, les enfants l'incorporent dans leurs agissements. Ceci est notamment décrit � la page 12: «L'homme est d'un côté. L'enfant, de l'autre, enjambe un ballon, pousse une fille[...]» Donc, le procédé utilisé est l'antithèse. Le locuteur associe � un enfant, l'innocence même, un comportement violent. Ceci signifie l'impact de la violence dans la vie des enfants en ville car ils assimilent la violence autour d'eux et deviennent violents eux-mêmes. Ainsi, ces extraits démontrent bien la présence de la violence dans le quartier parmi les enfants y habitant. Donc cette première idée principale démontre elle la violence dans un grand aspect de la vie en ville.

Edit: Curse you quote tags, you win for now.

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