Maplestorys Girlfriend Music Video MelliMelon
[url=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KzolNCb3AxI]Maplestory's Girlfriend[/url]
Hey everyone, I wanted to share this song and video that I wrote that my girlfriend sang. If you like it, let me know! I appreciate your thoughts. Also, if you DIDN'T like it, or if there was something you didn't like, please let me know! Constructive criticism is how we improve. Thanks!
EDIT: I'm getting a lot of negative comments. I guess this kind of "silliness" is not for everyone. Sorry if I have "pained" anyone.
EDIT2: As opposed to [url=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UcUVKSJjaYQ]Fleyx Stalker[/url] (which I also wrote 0.o)
Note: the following are not acceptable criticisms and will be ignored:
1) you need a better camera (because I definitely realize this. I have no money. That's the problem -_-)
2) Your GF's voice is _____ (insert adjective here)
3) Why are you posting this here? You're dumb.
Have a nice day!
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Thanks again for the positive comments. I intended it to be funny for everyone, but I suppose I don't have the equipment or experience to make it to most "basil"ers likings. Maybe next time!
I love the "You're a girl?..." part haha!
It's not that bad, people are too harsh. ):
[quote=Chrisonmale]You need better light on some scenes and if you put lyrics on the video, firstly don't make them go from side to side (<- then -> either keep it at one side, put the lyrics on (don't know what to call it, but the place where you put the wall of text) or like i did on my video (i will send link to you)[/quote]
Agreed. Valid comment. Thanks for being polite and helpful
lyrics and tune were catchy..gonna be singing this all day. :c
You need better light on some scenes and if you put lyrics on the video, firstly don't make them go from side to side (<- then -> either keep it at one side, put the lyrics on (don't know what to call it, but the place where you put the wall of text) or like i did on my video (i will send link to you)
[quote=ChibiKC]I liked the vid, you and your gf are very cute, don't let these people get to you.[/quote]
Damn it, Momo!
Don't let them knooooow~
I lol'd.
You look like Nick Jonas.
TS is polite, well-spoken, and obviously puts a lot of effort into his videos (not to mention his initial post). I liked the video, it was quirky and fun overall. There are obviously some production aspects you can't control at the moment so I'm not gonna go into that (sound, video quality), but other than that I see nothing wrong with it.
Good job. You're already ahead in life compared to other players of this game since you're mature and have a significant other, haha. Posters be jelly.
[quote=SupahTruffle]It's very good, much like your other video. What I may suggest is a better mike or do a recording on the computer; it sounds much cleaner on that. Try not to edit too much.[/quote]
Thanks. I plan on getting better recording equipment eventually (though I'm an oboist, not a vocalist). The editing comment is also true: these things are hard when you record in a dorm room .
Thanks for your opinion!
[quote=Wintir]You're an imbecile. If you think that is overweight, you are setting yourself up for a long sad and lonely life. Just because 90% of famous people are underweight does not suddenly make anorexic 'average weight'.[/quote]
I agree with him. It's not like the next step after that girl's weight is anorexic, there's an inbetween and that's fit. I wonder why you got so butthurt....
It's very good, much like your other video. What I may suggest is a better mike or do a recording on the computer; it sounds much cleaner on that. Try not to edit too much.
[quote=Wintir]The number of times she mentions the 'chat filter' comment, gets kind of jarring. It was okay the first couple, but after that a bit much. And the random other game references were a bit wtf, maybe if it was 'gaming gf' but doesn't really go with the maple theme. Would be cute to have simple maple versions of you two (as in look like your real selves) act out some of it, with hers saying what she's singing. Maybe watch 'the guild' on youtube to get some ideas if for some reason you haven't heard of them.
Other than that pretty funny. [/quote]
You win! Thanks for telling me what you didn't like. I appreciate it. Btw "the Guild" is hilarious.
[quote=BanditHelper]Ugh. The Basil community is mean tonight. The song is really not that bad.
You people should check out his remixes, they're pretty awesome.[/quote]
Thanks. I appreciate it.
Ugh. The Basil community is mean tonight. The song is really not that bad.
You people should check out his remixes, they're pretty awesome.
I seriously don't like the lyrics and the voice.
[quote=Fcroaonlk]The current number of constructive comments so far is... none.[/quote]
Well, you went to basil. That's dumb.
The current number of constructive comments so far is... none.
[quote=knito18]the funny thing is thats like me my gf is iver and i play ms[/quote]
"gf is iver" what? I don't understand.
the funny thing is thats like me my gf is iver and i play ms
1) you have a nice camera
2) Your GF's voice is beautiful
3) Why are you posting this here? You're smart.
[quote=Rellay]I have a better question. Why are you playing a girl character?[/quote]
Lol. You want the long answer or the short answer?
Short: why not?
Long: There are multiple reasons.
1) My Maplestory character is not "who I am". It is an avatar, a sort of role playing that I enjoy. That being said, why not try something different?
2) I created this when I was 13-14 and wasn't very mature.
3) I thought (and still think) that girl characters look cooler (better art)
4) People are nicer to females in game (I've noticed)
5) I "thought" (past tense) that female equipment would be cheaper (thus easier) to get. Oh how I was wrong.
[quote=AetherLord]Her voice is horribly flat.[/quote]
This falls under number 2 of the "do not say" list -_-. I'm looking for criticism on content, not production. Things like lyrics, screenplay, idea behind it all, etc...
Very cute!
I like the "you're a girl?" part haha
Nice F4