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The Legend of Zelda Ocarina of Time Cosplay Fan Video

Hi,

Me and my friend quickly made a video for Geek Week. It's not my usual thing to come up with a story. I usually film cosplays without any storyline.
What do you guys think of this and did it flow well? Did you understand what went on?

Any constructive feedback are welcome Also let me know what I did well
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qFux6cEhKNs&feature=c4-overview&list=UU54myhKj9M89T1hjrMjl3kw

Thanks!~