General

There's no need to have the grass/dirt footage on longer than a second.
There's a lot of unnecessary rotating.
The lip syncing parts were bad
Also, the last two girls, lol... the one on the left looked confused. It kind of killed the atmosphere you were trying to create

Bad remix of a good song. I closed it pretty quickly

oh lawwdd....

[quote=Keane]0/10 cringe worthy.

P.S. Cut the lame dubstep music. Its not 2010 anymore.[/quote]
If you have seen my channel I try and use a variety of music.

I liked the steady camera and didn't cringe much

I probably would've liked it more if I was more into cosplay

10/10 for the ending