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My storyline of Nlc

[header=header]Introduction[/header]
I'm a very simple guy. I usually don't get made at what NEXON changes/makes/adds. I was having a heart attack when they said they're expanding NLC. NLC is my favorite favorite place. It was just so well made. The story was just gorgeous. That was also the city where I usually was. The city where I leveled up to 30 (which was incredible for me at pre-BB) and to 70. The monsters, the NPC's, the music was just so perfect. And then it went downhill. This is the very first time I was mad at this company. NEXON completely ruined my dreams by [i]ruining[/i] NLC and it's amazing storyline- I thought they were going to add something about the mysterious MesoGears, or the infamous Krakia. Better yet, the entire Versal Town. BUT - no. They added aliens. [b]ALIENS[/b]. Well you shocked me NEXON, you really did. Now, since NEXON did poor on continuing the storyline, I decided to share to you guys my story of NLC and what I thought this update was going to be. I hope you like it, then if you don't - I'll find you and stab you in the throat. Bwahahahaha. Just kidding (: But do share your opinions. Here we go.
[header=header]The Earthquake[/header]
The ground shakes. Everyone is frightened. You see Bigger Ben sinking down to the ground ever so slightly. You quickly hide under the New Leaf Mall and wait for it to stop. The shaking stops after a minute. Everyone was quiet, looking at the sky and the building to see if anything bad has happened. The Eiffel Tower tilted slightly to the left and the Bigger Ben sunk just a few feet underground.
"What do you think happened?" You ask the mayor.
"I don't have a clue. Can you do me a favor and check every inch of Masteria and see if anyone was hurt or anything changed? I would do it myself but I have to keep an eye on the citizens here." The Mayor asks
You accept the challenge and go to every map, from Krakian Jungle to the Crimsonwood Keep. It cuts to a scene. You see something beneath the leaves in the Krakian Jungle. You take a peek and see a man looking like Professor Foxwit walking around a town with everything silver and metal. You spy on him and he turns around. You run quickly out of the map.
You go down to Bigger Ben, and you see nothing unusual yet. On the last floor, you see broken things everywhere. There are no more monsters and there is a hole in the bottom left corner. It cuts to a scene. You see a man in a formal suit - almost as if they were attending a wedding. They take the three gravestones. The Sunstone Grave, the Moonstone Grave, and the tomb of Christopher Crimsonheart. But on their way back to the hole - they drop two shiny things. A sun and a moon. You take the two and leave the map.
Now, you go over to the Phantom Forest. Nothing has changed. You walk all the way to Crimsonwood Keep. In the side of the Courtyard, you see a crack in the corner. You hide behind the Pirate statue. It cuts to a scene. You can see a man - dressed in black with a boomer and a shiny piece of metal. He drops the boomer and it explodes on the crack. The crack is now a hole. He goes down stairs and when he comes back up, the metal is gone. He covers up the crack with a tent and leaves. He drops a blue tie. You grab the tie and think to yourself, " Wasn't the man in Bigger Ben also wearing a Blue Tie? I've gotta tell this to the Mayor! " You teleport back to NLC and when you're there, you tel everything to the Mayor.
[header=header] Explanations! [/header]
You talk to the Mayor and tell him everything you saw.
" Great job! Seems like something suspicious is happening. (He whispers to himself: I knew this was going to happen. I've got to warn Corine and the rest of the gang...)
Listen, I think the Professor might know what's happenning in Versal Tow- I mean Krakian Jungle. You should talk to him about that. After that, talk to John as he knows a lot about Bigger Ben. When you're done with that - talk to Lita about what you saw at Crimsonwood. I am sure she knows what happened. Talk to me again when you're done talking to all three.
You go over to Professor. You tell him what you saw in Krakian Jungle. He gasps and jumps. He guickly looks for something.. a rock.
"Do you see this rock, my son. The same right? Wrong. It's black in the front, but white in the back. Just because things are different colors in one piece of material does not make them the same! The black - It's evil. dark. The white, it's representing peace. That son, is a Yin Yang. Everything is balanced. Now why am I saying this? That man you saw. That's my brother. My twin brother. Everything is balanced - if I'm nice and patient, he must be. Evil and impatient. It's a must, my son. An absolute [b]MUST[/b]. No matter how close you are with someone, you always have an opposite. No matter what. He is Evil. He's been looking for Krakia. Have you heard of that place, son? It's a magical town. In the old times, no one else knew about this so called "technology". But, the Krakians found this ancient land that had technology hidden under the grounds. That ancient land was Masteria. This place. Think about it, if you knew nothing about technology. Nothing at all. And one day - you find it while digging for minerals. The most advanced technology. Wouldn't you be amazed by this discovery too? The Krakians kept digging and digging. They discovered a giant building. Discovered by Francis Ben. And no, it's not that Bigger Ben we have today. They dug even more and saw an even bigger building. They named the smaller one "Big Ben" and the bigger one "Bigger Ben." They would reuse the materials they found to build their own town. It was as far as the eye can see. One day, there was no more materials. They had to destory Big Ben and use it for their own town. The Krakians thrived. They had made up their own language called "Taru". But, as the more they continued to build, the more popular Masteria got. People from all over the world went on to live here. Here, there was freedom. But, just soon after - an evil Alchemist took control.. Mliss. He made a potion that made people evil. The whole Krakian town got tricked. He ordered the Krakians to attack another people in the west of Masteria. The Crimsons. If you want to know more about that, you should talk to Lita. Anyways, Mliss also drank this potion to make him live forever. They say that he's still here hiding going to make revenge. The Krakians and the Crimsons fought for years and years. Suddenly, it ended. The war. Everything. They just disappared. Even I don't know what happened. I think my brother, Witfox wants to bring back the Krakians. He might cause a war again. Or worse. Could you check on him and see if he's doing anything suspicious?"
"Okay. Thanks for the information. I'll check on your brother for you." You reply. You go over John. You tell him what you saw in Bigger Ben.
"This is bad. This is real bad. Who you saw was Mliss' assistant, Dayle. Do you know Mliss? He was-" You interrupt him saying you already know him.
"Oh okay. Dayle is a sly thief and spy. Come closer, he could be spying on us this very moment. He helped Mliss conquer the entire Masteria. Let me give you a little background on Masteria. The Krakian's weren't the first one here. The was a small village the built this building we're on right now. They were advanced with technology. They were the Old Sappes. The Old Sappes were... special. They had portals that led to places like Amoria, Ariant, and this exotic place - Versal Town. The Sappians had help from these people. Amoria helped them with the religion. Ariant with the buildings. And Versal Town with the technology. Versal and Old Sappe worked together to create this... concept. Where one person can go to a whole new world with a portal. They built one beneath the Bigger Ben. I think that's what you discovered. The portal to all these places. And now, Dayle is using it to go out and about. Please look inside that portal and see where it leads. Dayle and Mliss could be coming in for revenge. Maybe, only you can save us."
"I will try to stop Dayle and Mliss! The whole Masteria depends on me. (Oh jeez.)" You say proudly. You leave to talk to Lita. You tell everything to Lita.
"Why would you be going there anyways? I told you it's dangerous. But, now it's really dangerous. That "shiny metal" was the moonstone." You tell her you had both the sunstone and moonstone, but Dayle probably stole it from me while I wasn't looking.
"Look. Adore that sunstone. Don't let it lose your sight. Let me tell you something I've never told anyone before. The Crimsons were very very smart. They didn't build houses. They just built one big house. They did this so people wouldn't be able to track them.That was very smart for people back then. The castle was built so strategically and nicely so no one could enter without knowing a secret code. This whole idea was thought of the four Grandmasters and the famous Christopher Crimsonheart. Crimsonheart was the leader of the Crimsons. after they built it, they explored more of Masteria. They saw people. At first, they were peaceful to each other. They were like neighbors. But, an evil man cursed those Krakians. You've heard of him right? I guessed so because you knew Dayle, his sidekick. That caused war. Crimsonheart was killed, sadly. Masteria was almost like Magatia during those times. The Crimsons were furious. They were tearing up because the Krakians killed Crimsonheart, their leader. Luckily - they thought of a plan for this. The new leader or leaders were now the Grandmasters. The Grandmasters thought of a perfect plan. A sun and a moon stone. They put part of Crimsonheart's soul in each one. If the two combine with the crown of Crimson - it would be either good or bad. If someone evil did connected the three - there would be an ever-lasting war. If someone angelic connected the three - peace would be made fom the entire Masterian continent. And the crown is hidden deep under the Crimsonwood Castle. I think that's where Dayle went. The Moonstone, Sunstone, and Crimsonwood itself was buried in Bigger Ben. They said - for 100 years, Crimsonwood will protect the stones. It's been 100 years now and that's why I think the earthquake happened and that's why Dayle is trying to get the stones. I need you to guard that stone with your life."
"Okay. I will! I will take care of this like it's my baby." You say to her. You leave and tell this all to the Mayor.

"Oh my. I have an idea. You should help them all. From now on, listen to those three. They will guide you from now on. " he says.
[header=header] To be continued?[/header]
Should I continue my story?

March 26, 2012

7 Comments • Newest first

jerico9

[quote=XAznNinja]According to the quests before the revamp, Versal was not a town. The quest dialogues mentioned that Versal is the alternate 'reversed' dimension of maple. Its also where the cwkpq bosses supposedly came from. And also Versalmas if anyone remembers that old event.[/quote]

Yeah, but I wanted to include Versal too, and to make that seem realistic - why not make it a town? (: Like NEXON would make a whole entire alternate universe. d:
@everyone else
Thanks for your opinions, maybe I will continue it!

Reply March 26, 2012
arlongpark

that was pretty cool. you should definitely continue it. although with versal i thought it was like a parallel world not a town. but since i dont expect a full parallel world to be added im fine with town. anyways is this mliss the same alchemist that turned killian into headless horseman? and the thing with the rock. is that supposed to be a reference to the versal world cuz you know its an opposite thing. ohhh if you do continue you should add a part where you have to fight your parallel self

Reply March 26, 2012
XAznNinja

According to the quests before the revamp, Versal was not a town. The quest dialogues mentioned that Versal is the alternate 'reversed' dimension of maple. Its also where the cwkpq bosses supposedly came from. And also Versalmas if anyone remembers that old event.

Reply March 26, 2012
Pereeia

I read the entire thing.
That's WAY better than freaking aliens.
We've got aliens in Omega Sector. Now we have them in NLC?

Reply March 26, 2012
XxSuperMoFoxX

i just saw a huge wall....i walked around it

Reply March 26, 2012
jerico9

[quote=FOBShooter]You on your period bro?[/quote]
No, you on yours bro?

Reply March 26, 2012
jerico9

:o I know right. I have an awesome life. hahahahha.

Reply March 26, 2012