Judge my modeling progression?
Yup yup. Super simple. I made two 3D models, gijinkas of Monokuma and Monomi from Dangan Ronpa. I made Monokuma first, followed by Monomi two or three weeks later. I want you guys to tell me where I improved and where I still need improvement, etc.
[url=http://i.imgur.com/BcjuMpZ.png]Monokuma.[/url]
[url=http://i.imgur.com/n1qpxQk.png]Monomi.[/url] (ignore the wonky neck, it's been fixed)
For what they originally look like, click [url=http://images.wikia.com/danganronpa/images/3/3a/Height_comparison_Monobear_and_Monomi.png]here.[/url]
[url=http://i.imgur.com/ooReO00.png]Bonus Monomi render,[/url]ignoring the different color skin shades on her neck and face - this was before I started seriously texturing.
August 23, 2013
4 Comments • Newest first
@Ecyz: That's just the posing, since the shorts mostly move with the thigh itself o;
[url=http://i.imgur.com/vzuSZ6H.png]Here's a default-stance picture of her when her model is loaded.[/url]
@Boullion: I feel the same about his arms, but I wasn't able to shrink them down after I realized they were too big u_u; I'm thinking of remaking him completely, because he's just.. all around bluh every time I look at him.
Monomi has an option to remove her nose if needed, I was just too lazy to do it for the quick renders x; And yes, she's kind as opposed to Kuma's heartless tactics, so I tried to give her eyes a ~shine~ c:
Monomi's right leg (viewer's left) attaches awkwardly at the hip I think.
@Kazno: When I started modeling them, I was going with the approach that they were going to be children-esque. Shota/loli, if you will x;
As for Monomi's arms, they're partially hidden behind her back, they're a bit thicker than they look o:
Monomi looks great, legs look real and are a good size, eyes are perfect in size and detail. I think the arms are too thin though.
Monokuma's legs were too thin and I think the eyes are too big, you should've gave him pants shorts make him look weird.