General

Uhm I don't think a lot of people would actually spend their time browsing through every picture. If it's on the main page of course they're going to get a lot more comments. They're more publicized then.

With the head shape, I'm stuck thinking about the Oblongs. Body shape should also be worked on, you have large breasts and then the rest of the body tapers down. The clothing also lacks form, it shares the same contour with her body for the most part, and the jacket is just flat fabric. Clavicles should not end at the neck, they actually go from the sternum to the scapula, and the trapezius muscles would be seen above the clavicle, not on the same level. The kunai (Steelys) look too small, and the way the claw is compared to her left hand isn't working-- while the claw's positioning and design can be determined to an extent, having the forearm curve like that makes it look like rubber, and from the actual design we can tell it's not supposed to mount to the side of the arm. The hand's positioning really throws that off. The "spikes" of the Red Craven should line up with the knuckles. Also, rather than taking an existing screen shot for the background, you should draw one yourself. With the pasted screenshot, you have an incorrect vanishing point, and with the crop we have no idea what she could be standing on (the only logical reasoning for where she stands must be that she's standing on something though).