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@LordZubin I decided to talk to him in person...and tell him about his mistake. I forgive him because I know that everyone makes mistakes. Thanks though.

I'm a blunt person. I will tell you that I am offended by your response... when I was talking about my dreams about helping people. You said "Yeah, yeah" as if you don't care about my dream to help others. The note I wrote you no longer applies [since?] I am not easily offended; but I do care if someone I have feelings [for] doesn't respect my dreams. I thought you were different and cared about me. I guess you don't really care about me. I'll still be your friend though.

I put some possible edits in brackets. I think you should perhaps let him apologize and mention it in your email, some people just have too much fun during break to really say what they mean in an email. By that, I mean that you should probably edit or remove the last two sentences.

@zoneflare2 Alright I just posted it in case people ask or they're curious. Thanks anyway.

@gangar32 Yeah I have to agree with you...and texting is pretty much the same. I prefer to talk to people in person though. Thanks again.

@gangar32 Thank you. I will admit that I was being c_cky in one of the emails I sent him....because I said "sorry if I'm too mature for you" after I said "I'm 18 but I feel like I'm 23"

@TheDudeAbides He was insensitive.. He seemed to care about me before today..and sounded sad/felt sorry for me..when I told him about my family problems.

so what did he do wrong?

I think you shouldnt put offended in caps. It makes you seem dumb, Im pretty sure your smarter than that. Plus he might get upset when he reads that part.

@iLLer Thank you.

@EruditeISBACK

I suppose so. Didn't think about that. Thanks.

I forgot to mention.

He asked me what's up? and I said not much..and I didn't say "Not much. You?" Like I usually do.. Instead I was focused/inclined to help him with his career path/future.

@timdhong it's okay

@ImSoCute I wonder why would he even walk with me... He walked by himself today..and didn't walk with his friend. He would've walked with his friend if he didn't want to talk to me.. I'll think about ditching him (not as a friend though).

@CrazeeFun Well you're lucky to have her then.

@CrazeeFun Alright, I'll try talking to him about it. I tend to get upset and/or overreact when someone I like is insensitive about important things.. My dreams are important to me... Well your GF is a different person. Every girl is different. I'm not the type who is into bad boys.

Oh, and I meant to suggest writing "someone I have feelings for" instead of what it is now. Sorry.

[quote=timdhong]@Laker1294: Perhaps by phone then? Email is a rather impersonal method of communicating strong emotions.[/quote]

I don't have his number...and I didn't get it because I was afraid of getting attached. I'll ask for it when I get back from break though. I could also hand write another note.

@Laker1294: Perhaps by phone then? Email is a rather impersonal method of communicating strong emotions.

@timdhong Well the next time I'll see him is when break is over (next year).

@CrazeeFun He didn't sound unhappy though.. He said it really fast. I'm not in a relationship with him. We're both single.

No problem, and you're probably better off talking to him like @ZoneFlare2 suggested then sending an e-mail.

[quote=CrazeeFun]@Laker1294: srry, i didn't read the e-mail i just wanted to say that

but anyways after reading your e-mail, i'm thinking maybe he was busy or something and just wrote that iunno[/quote]

We were walking down the hall and it was passing period...

@CrazeeFun NTY..it's not my fault that he's insensitive.

@mule987654, @timdhong, @zoneflare2 Thank you for helping me. I really appreciate it.

@zoneflare2 It's okay. I don't know if his friend told him to be/act insensitive...or he just is. I'm not into bad boys anymore.. He seemed to care about me awhile ago.

@WunderKind I wasn't concerned about my punctuation or grammar. I want to know how I can improve and if I should send the email. I really liked that guy...and even tried to help him by showing him different career paths in Business (his major).

@zoneflare2 I'm upset/offended...about my friend's (who I had feelings for) insensitivity.

@WundrKind I don't care if no one cares. I just need help. Basil is my last resort.

@above:Thanks for helping me. I really appreciate it.

[B]SUGGESTIONS:[/B]
Start the letter off with "I'm a blunt person." You might want the ellipses to be three periods though to follow convention.
Get rid of the "I like" and leave it as "who I have feelings for." I'm not really a fan of paranthesis. If it were me, I'd use a comma or an em-dash.
It's alright besides that.

Sounds to me like you are both crazy and he just wants to get it in.