how do you like my poem
In english we took phrases from newspapers and wrote them into a poem
Just get on and do it
Cancer, war, and abuse
wanted for fraud and embezzlement
sinking of a vessel
sentenced to 20 years in prison
will zombies ever take over parliament hill?
$439 million
Governments, police, citizens, and family
Daily fear of being eaten
criminal activity
human rights
Just get on and do it
February 18, 2013
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@amuro uh....okay...i was just asking for feedback..
[quote=omgsampson]doesnt rhyme[/quote]
exactly. to me, it isn't a poem unless it rhymes >:O
Poem...? Well it certainly has expression, but it lacks a lot of literately elements...
Okay, I read it all. Am I supposed to shed a tear now?
@akantor considering i took random phrases from newspapers the point of this poem isnt really to make sense
@fudget maybe "just get on and do it" refers to stopping the bad things? idk, there isnt really a meaning.
@omgsampson some of the lines rhyme
doesnt rhyme
I don't get it