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That was a really good plot! Just that it's kind of weird how Kevin and Vince were just in the same class and Vince said that he was going to train after school again; after class Kevin asks Vince if he's heading home when he already knows Vince is heading home to train. I just thought it was kind of weird, but I guess I'm the only who felt that way.

[quote=cashmoneyinfini]The music seems familiar.

Wonder what it's from.[/quote]

i lol'd

I'm still new to animating. And starting a fight scene proves difficult with the little experience I have. I'm literally learning as I go...So I'll admit, this ep is a little sketchy. But there's more to come!

[quote=MeerCats]The quality of the sprites aren't really well done. And a tip, use custom sprites, they tend to catch peoples eye.
But still nice job ^^[/quote]

Actually, not using customs is highly encouraged by the animating community. It shows you have creativity.

To the video maker:

1. Try using an alignment line.
2. Attempt to implement physics in jumps. When he attacks, the movement is too consistent. Try going up faster, then slowing down, then vice versa for going down.
3. Generic storyline...:/
4. Sliding a bit after attacks is helpful.
5. Assuming you're using flash, smoothen your sprites, or tracebitmap them for higher quality. Remember to save them into symbols.

I like how you put effort into this though, that's always a very good thing. Also, this is cnc. Comment and Critisicm. I am in no way flaming you for this.

Hope to see you improve! o3o

-Gimmesoup

You guys can sub my YouTube for updates if you want!

Great use of bgm, i'd like to see more animations ie; hands and such if you have the time. I'll take into account that you're just starting out but,
I have high expectations
Jk, i'll wait for episode 2.

Dayumm NEXT EPISODE PLZ

Sounds like Ao No Exorcist, loved the anime so you better do it justice Buddy

[quote=lvlaplemasta]I made up white by choice. Shoulda chose something different like PURPLE or something if i knew WHITE was taken already....[/quote]

Do turquoise, it won't be taken. I am being serious.

OT: I actually liked this a bit, some parts you had very little animation, but it was good overall.

I made up white by choice. Shoulda chose something different like PURPLE or something if i knew WHITE was taken already....

you didn't take "white flame" from shakugan no shana did you lol

start part 2

Nah it's fine. I like criticism. Makes me learn.

The quality of the sprites aren't really well done. And a tip, use custom sprites, they tend to catch peoples eye.
But still nice job ^^

Lol white flames..... >.< Ao no Exorcist much? Got the power from the dad, has to hide it blah blah, I'm sorry but this plot has been over done way too much . Sorry to be harsh but its hard to find something original nowadays.

I'm glad you guys like it!

I'm actually working on a theme song for the series first. I'll post it on basilmarket too when I'm done.

i love it alreday wen is episode 2 <3

The main character is blue. I like this

The music seems familiar.

Wonder what it's from.