So ive started trying to rap.
I've been doing it for about a month and a half and i wanna know what you guys think. http://www.youtube.com/user/ramalcollins1?feature=mhee
September 5, 2011
So ive started trying to rap.
I've been doing it for about a month and a half and i wanna know what you guys think. http://www.youtube.com/user/ramalcollins1?feature=mhee
8 Comments • Newest first
[quote=incxalx16]u like watermelon? or fried chicken? purple drink anyone?[/quote]
no, bojangles? , hellz yeah
sick, just awesome, don't smile that much lol.
I found all aspects of it boring. You seemed like you weren't into it. If you seem bored, your listener will be bored. Put some energy into it.
EDIT: Also, just adding in... I watched the default on your channel page. I didn't watch the others, so maybe that advice doesn't apply to your other videos.
[quote=MaskedForLife]You have better shots at the NBA Lol
I can't hear your lyrics, either cuz of the way you say it or cheap equipment.
-Get professional equipment
-Post your lyrics up
-I think your a stalker cuz of your stage name
-it seems like your using your smile to substitue for your looks[/quote]
ouch at that looks comment o.O
work on your "game face"
closed the window as soon as that guy started smiling
thanks
You smile too much, you need a hardcore srs face
It's not that bad actually