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don't let that cute chibi picture fool you--this cygnus knight is actually an amazon jungle beastess!! hooray for poorly placed random backgrounds..anyone have suggestions for who to draw next? no personal commissions~

July 6, 2012

34 Comments • Newest first

MissMaylie

[quote=Noirel]I really like the lighting and coloring in this. Personally I'd like to see it without the hard lines, because I think the details on the bow is gorgeous and the pixelly line art detracts from the overall look.

It might help to block out her torso first and then add where the shoulders are, as her right arm holding the arrow almost looks like its attached to the base of her neck and top of her boob. Her left thigh that's lifted and the butt attached should be cropped higher, where the shading starts. Then shade that entire thigh so her calf pops out/her thigh is under that short skirt.[/quote]

thanks, i do need to work on refining my lineart
and take more time with anatomy that makes sense haha

Reply July 10, 2012
Cookieman9000

Dam I think I'm in love. <3

Reply July 9, 2012
FightFightFight

That's not Wind Archer, that's Cygnus. lol yeah......
OT:Great drawing, dem legs. and dat ass

Reply July 9, 2012
NoNsensical

Just put a bag over it. Put a bag over it.

Reply July 8, 2012
frazzlsnazzl

Her right leg looks broken (if looking straight at her) and the face is....requiring improvement

Reply July 8, 2012
Bobomanbob

God dammit her foot is in the way >.<

Reply July 8, 2012
Schokoshake

I'm not certain, but I think that there is something wrong with her right leg. It's really long, and in comparison the proportion is greater than 1:1. Also, on that same leg, at the top of it where it connects to the hip bone it looks as though it's a random bulge. I'm not certain as to how girls' legs look in that area, but I do not think there should be that much disparity unless she got like a leg transplant or something.
._.
It looks very detailed though

Reply July 7, 2012
Pereeia

Her legs seem a bit weird, she has abs, and her 'bra' seems too small, her face looks deformed, there's no bowstring, the eyes look freaky and the pictures overall needs thicker lines around her body

Reply July 7, 2012 - edited
iLoveJesters

[quote=InterBlast]What's wrong with her right bra...[/quote]

fanservice, that's what's wrong.
Nothing like an occasional under-boob to spruce up your day!

Well, that and her bra has extra cloth below it that flows downwards. Check the picture for reference

Reply July 7, 2012 - edited
TyeDie

Shynsoo and Cygnus next ^^

And yeah, kinda derped the eyes? Its still better than anything I could draw

Reply July 7, 2012 - edited
AfroAmerican

Looks anorexic.
Would not bang

Reply July 7, 2012 - edited
blazi4ever

Only thing that's bothering me is the pixellation in the entire drawing; I highly suggest that you resize it nonetheless so it doesn't get that squarey effect.

Reply July 7, 2012 - edited
DizzyMyFuture

To be honest it really reminded me of this character from Magna Carta 2..

http://i.neoseeker.com/ca/magna_carta_ii_conceptart_131yv.jpg

But nevertheless its a nice drawing.

Reply July 7, 2012 - edited
ksc16424

mhmmm, irena; my sweetsn c;

Reply July 7, 2012 - edited
thephily341

Love the style and everything you did here. The eyes were a bit diverged from the centre of the face, but it's an amazing piece of art.

Reply July 7, 2012 - edited
Nolen

Reminds me of Felicia from Darkstalkers

Reply July 7, 2012 - edited
Seref

The face and ass/thigh seems a little unporportional

Reply July 7, 2012 - edited
Jovial

Omg if you are taking suggestions can you consider Krag? +_+ <3

I really love the way your colored her..and her physique, dayum!

Reply July 7, 2012 - edited
Russyy

[quote=Sunlight]And you know, they're like a foot apart[/quote]

LMAO idk this made me laugh so much

Reply July 7, 2012 - edited
Russyy

Derpy face o.o

Reply July 7, 2012 - edited
Barquifa

You guys are drunk, other than the *somewhat* odd face, this is good work. Good job.

Reply July 7, 2012 - edited
XueyeHua

Really nice job

Reply July 7, 2012 - edited
Erag0n1

a little awkward, but very nice none the less

Reply July 7, 2012 - edited
tomas1251

I really relly like your style. <3

Reply July 7, 2012 - edited
Noirel

I really like the lighting and coloring in this. Personally I'd like to see it without the hard lines, because I think the details on the bow is gorgeous and the pixelly line art detracts from the overall look.

It might help to block out her torso first and then add where the shoulders are, as her right arm holding the arrow almost looks like its attached to the base of her neck and top of her boob. Her left thigh that's lifted and the butt attached should be cropped higher, where the shading starts. Then shade that entire thigh so her calf pops out/her thigh is under that short skirt.

Reply July 7, 2012 - edited
Rondragon123

I love the shiny hills under that skirt

Reply July 7, 2012 - edited
PrinnyBomb

Draw Wonky the Fairy. In a skirt. >=D

Reply July 7, 2012 - edited
cccurrified

Legs seem a little bit... you know, off shape (specifically her right). There's no bowstring? The eyes can be a little more closer together, and the hair starts out 'thin' at the top, the ends seems thicker.

Overall, this is a nice, different, 'quirky' style .

Reply July 7, 2012 - edited
ExpiredMilk

This was almost super amazing, the face just ruined it. It looked a bit try hard anime. but I still love everything else.

Reply July 7, 2012 - edited
MissMaylie

[quote=Fusoya]Face is fine it's just the eyes are screwed up, there's meant to be white but it's just the pupils and eyelashes LOL[/quote]

oh yeah...how did i forget derp o.o

Reply July 7, 2012 - edited
ImaClubYou

I was turned on, then I saw the face.

Great drawing anyway, just needa work on that.

Reply July 7, 2012 - edited
Kythro

ew she's all like naked and stuff

Reply July 7, 2012 - edited