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Made this is like 2 hours. Please dont comment me on the grey this is called a claymodel. Maybe in the furture I will texture it!

January 15, 2011

17 Comments • Newest first

MrRik

Well i uploaded the coloured one already but the mods need to accept it so it's coming! SOON!

Reply January 16, 2011
VitalKnight

why color?
(my pc is in black and white)
...aint that funny

Reply January 16, 2011
errorreport

Looks good, though you could of put a little more work into it. Also please don't comment saying "Like you couldn't do this" Cause I could. (Ive taken classes that use Autodesk programs) It does take a few hours to do this so regardless if you could do this or not it is better than the choppy comics that take only 1 hour and anyone can make with banned story and images (though those seem to get praised)

Reply January 16, 2011
deathleaper

[quote=Beesafree]i hope this has helped, but if you think its offensive ..... then dont read it[/quote]

If you aren't being funny or sarcastic, then I suggest putting that at the top of your post, where they'd read this before they read the post =3

Reply January 16, 2011
Tiffy44

[quote=MrRainMan]seems a bit too short.

also reminds me of DS stylus lol.[/quote]
That would be just awesome XD
Color it! It looks amazing

Reply January 15, 2011
soggynugget

[quote=MrRainMan]seems a bit too short.

also reminds me of DS stylus lol.[/quote]

Omg.. they need to make this to put on top of your stylus, I'd buy

Reply January 15, 2011
ElConrad

[quote=MangoTangoFox]Why did you even render it un-textured? You are just lazy.....[/quote]

Its not lazy, adding materials is a long and tedious process if you want it to look good, it also jacks up your render time by loads.

Reply January 15, 2011
MrRik

thx for all the comments, and for everyone asking for the textured version it will come soon
@Mangotangofox Well texturing isnt the most fun part of making a model.
@Beesafree Thx for the feedback i'm shall see if can make it even better

The software i used was 3ds max 2011 Student version.

Reply January 15, 2011
MyOracle

Thats hot.

Reply January 15, 2011
MangoTangoFox

Why did you even render it un-textured? You are just lazy.....

Reply January 15, 2011
Beesafree

if you want criticism.... (if you dont, dont read, i am VERY blunt)
the blue points around the head are pointed inward (yours points inward towards the plane that the handle and head are on, it needs to point in on the other direction) you may have a right point here, but if you do - you still need the other one (which would make it a cone)
the orb is an orb... yours kinda reminds me of a peach
the bottom of the handle widens and then comes to a point
the point on the head, that is our left to the point that is parallel to the handle, it seems uncentered, but this may just be the perspective of the piece playing tricks on me o.O

the part where the handle connects to the head doesn't exist, or it may be a smaller version of what you did
on this part towards the top near the orb, is a double ring, that needs to be smaller and in the middle of the head (which would solve any movement problem you may have with the orb)
the other part, i assume is the blue part just before the head, if this is so, it's size needs to be drastically reduced, and separated from the double ring

i hope this has helped, but if you think its offensive ..... then dont read it

Reply January 15, 2011
NLaran

Nice Rik!

Reply January 15, 2011
Icephoenix21

It looks very nice to me, good job!

Reply January 15, 2011
ElConrad

What software btw?

Reply January 15, 2011
ElConrad

The render is a bit noisy and the larger circle could do to be a bit more smooth but good job nevertheless

Reply January 15, 2011 - edited
plain88

Nice one. Looking forward to the coloured version.

Reply January 15, 2011 - edited
WolfPak

I hope the colored version will look great

Reply January 15, 2011 - edited