Try and put fillers, or at least a background, in the white spaces. And fix up the grammar in panel 3 and you'll be fine =D Other than that, nice comic XD *+like*
ty for all your suggestions, and ty to the ppl that remind me where i got the idea from, i completely forgot that i took it from "The Simpsons", i LOLed a lot when i saw that, also notice that my main langueage isnt english, still have some things to learn, ill try to make my next comics better.
You should make it so you have the comic feel, instead of the empty white spaces, ithink thats where the boxes should have been instead of diagonally, overall, nice o_O
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[url=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=unRrDB08PFc]Simpsons lie detector test.[/url]
lol i liuked it alot
Lol o-o
Not the greatest i have read, but still good.
LOL
bad applicant, bad! D:<
Hahahaha NJ Luis
noooooooooooob noooooooooooooob nooooooooooob noble wussy!
Try and put fillers, or at least a background, in the white spaces. And fix up the grammar in panel 3 and you'll be fine =D
Other than that, nice comic XD
*+like*
Thanks for making my day.
ty for all your suggestions,
and ty to the ppl that remind me where i got the idea from,
i completely forgot that i took it from "The Simpsons", i LOLed a lot when i saw that,
also notice that my main langueage isnt english, still have some things to learn,
ill try to make my next comics better.
hehehe nice xD
Too bad lie detectors irl don't actually work xD
[quote=ho4show]yea, no...[/quote]
I lol'd @ this instead of the comic.
Just remove the white spaces, fix the lady's grammar in panel 3, and your good 2 go XD
It did make me "lol" though xD
lollollollollollollollol
This had potential...better miracle cube this comic.
[quote=DarthMason]You dont want stupid ppl, so u use a lie detector...
...yea, no.[/quote]
looks like it worked?
OT: I liked it. Also, the white spaces are better than placing everything next to each other IMO.
[url=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FJkp9d6f1_0]This[/url] much?
Make the white spaces a different colour and put little fillers or something in there?..
Alright comic.
LOL!
+like.
Kind of an obvious comic, but it still delivers humor.
You dont want stupid ppl, so u use a lie detector...
...yea, no.
yea, no...
You should make it so you have the comic feel, instead of the empty white spaces, ithink thats where the boxes should have been instead of diagonally, overall, nice o_O